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This manhua is one my favorite and has SO MUCH POTENTIAL but it has some major plot holes in it.
I am confused as to how this random obsession came about and these thoughts of love? When we first meet Mr. choi all he does is degrade the MC. He never spouts words of love… ok you wanted to force the MC to lose the baby because of your father but it never exactly states what the father will do exactly. So he decides THE BEST THING TO DO IS FORCE THE MC TO HAVE A MISCARRIAGE?!? Not only that he doesn’t even write to the omega after that or even try to have a conversation to at least explain himself? This isn’t the actions of someone who loved the MC. He also randomly decides to leave him with some gangster I didn’t understand it was so effing weird to me. If the goal was to take back the MC at another point in time why isolate him and make him feel like shit, he is lucky that the MC didn’t commit suicide out of despair…..
Also in another chapter Mr. Choi states how he always had to follow the rules of his dad and how his dad was abusive BUT how could Mr. Choi not know that starting anything with the MC was a horrible idea. This is some rich alpha family- he has access to prostitutes WHY GO FOR THE MC WHEN YOU KNOW IT WILL ANGER YOUR DAD?!? This only makes sense if there was no love involved and the MC baby with Mr. Choi was a complete accident, That Mr Choi was just fooling around and wasn’t in love - This makes more sense because he had to know not saying any words to the MC would utterly destroy the relationship and again all we see is Mr. Choi saying nothing nice to the MC literally saying things that would break his spirit- it creates some major plot holes. Also what medication is Mr. Choi taking and for what? If Mr. Choi is on any medication it would make more sense that the second son would not be allowed to be free at all?!?
Also in the first few chapters the fathers talks about bringing Mr. Choi’s brother into the company—- WHY did he allow for the second son to become a teacher!!? Also we see that the second son has bit an omega and mated with them… Why is the second son allowed to be so free but the first can not? I believe that the 1st son and the second son have different mothers because Mr. Choi sends the women he calls mother away. The second son says he won’t be a puppet like his brother but if this dad is so evil why is the second son even allowed to become a teacher? Also if the second son is friends with the MC why hire him to be a piano teacher when apparently he plays better than the MC… Also if you want to take piano lessons why from an omega and WHY have the lessons at your house if you care at all for the MC even just as a friend why even allow the MC and Mr. Choi to meet I am so confused <_<.
Also on chapter 68 you find out that Choi and the ML are half brothers - which again in itself is hypocritical - Why would Mr Chois father threaten to kill the MC if he himself never killed the ML father and the option to force the ML father to abort the baby never happened?!?! This father of Mr. Choi is so evil but he doesn’t take care of his own loose ends? Also they never explain WTF happened to the ML father- we know he’s an omega we know he killed himself and was on drugs BUT they never state what happened between the ML’s father and Mr. Chois father…… were they in love? Was this a one night stand gone wrong? Why exactly did the ML father keep the baby <—— Also if the Mr. Chois father knew about the baby why didn’t he at least let his own child grow in a more stable environment?!? Why did he allow for his child’s mother to become a prostitute to earn money and also allow him to become a heavy drug user?!? This just doesn’t make sense. Next season is obviously going to be about the Mr. Chois father but wtf is going to happen to Mr. Choi- he tried to kill his dad he didn’t succeed I don’t know why he visited him in the hospital and didn’t finish the job if his plan failed? So if Mr. Chois dad disowns the first son for all the bad things he did - instead of the ML it would be the second son who would take over so what’s going to happen to that omega? They have bonded already the omega has a bite mark?!?!
Again this has so much potential if all of this was more through but I still love it
That’s the only thing I care about. If the author makes the beta end up with the alpha it looks like the beta doesn’t have self respect especially after the alpha didn’t take care of the beta after the knotting and putting the beta constantly as an after thought.
Also again in the raws the omega is in the lead and the alpha has taken a back seat
The author made a mistake in making the ML so rich and controlling that the thought of the ML not hacking the MC email sounds completely asinine. There is no way considering how controlling the ML, that he has people tailing the MC that he doesn’t hack his email- like that’s the easiest thing to do more so then hiring people to follow the MC. It would have made more sense if they met randomly and or that female got obsessed with telling the MC the truth so she did some under cover stalking to tell him now that would sound more plausible
On another note this is too short- I want to know the real ending because if the MC hates it so much I can’t imagine him not wanting to off himself. I think a more Sadistic route would be for this author to randomly write side stories about the MC dreaming of how the relationship could have been if the ML wasn’t so crazy and didn’t have to lie to him that he was an omega. That we see the MC and the ML fall in love for real but the very last chapter we see that the MC has poisoned themselves and cursed the ML for being so stupid and the MC seeing what he has done and faces the consequences of his actions….. regardless I want a proper ending because even the side stories didn’t so It for me I want to know wtf the MC is going to do.
Lastly this is not an example of Lima syndrome- Lima syndrome would need a completely different atmosphere from what’s going on. The ML while yes he did messed up things to the MC that’s not sympathizing with the MC that’s just straight up being a manipulative psycho. For this to turn into Lima Syndrome the MC has to constantly cry and hate the ML and overtime the ML just feels completely sorry for the MC and lets him go free. <—- more then likely if this was to happen over a long period of time it’s possible that the MC would develop Stockholm syndrome once’s he’s freed but that’s another story for later. I just really need more chapters because this is very unfinished
Ch 19 shows us that Noah was raped- we got practically no back to any of that ch 14 starts with a contract about giving birth tk 3 children?!?! UNDERSTOOD BUT ch 19 makes us believe he is raped so does the ML hate the first child because it’s a child of rape - I don’t understand he could have had an abortion we have no idea how Noah exactly is feeling
Second issue if the first child is a child of rape WHY- does he neeed to produce 2 more children- WHERE the fuck did that come from it’s so confusing
Also was the second child a stillborn or did the omega just not want to give the baby away it doesn’t say anything just a bunch of vague pictures.
The alpha knots in the ch 18 so is the child in ch 19 the child from that situation and the Alpha decided to keep it- LIKE WTF IS GOING ON- also why the fuck is he giving these children to his sister in law? Why does it have to be his family member? Why do we never see his brother as well just the sister in law?!?
I honestly wish I never ever read ch 14-19 because it has too many plot holes I literally have no idea wtf happened or why. Normally when you like someone you don’t force them to carry your children and give them away <_<. Also if this is some effed up stupid ass situation where the dad is “evil” and would only approve of the omega after he gave birth to three children is nonsense. I DONT UNDERSTAND!!
The first child was planned an noah did not want to give the child away, hence his anxiousness, he also tried to avoid sex so as not to go through the trauma of giving the second child away, but was raped and got pregnant he then shut off cause not only was he angry he has to give the child away again without seeing them.
The second child was still born due to stress and malnourishment as he had giving up on every thing, the confusing part is that the author has some kind of justification for that contract and the alphas actions,
Maybe this justification was the friends we made along the way, cause it is not in the room with us, most likely the author was trying to go for your last paragraph's opinion, but that fell like a ton of brick and so they must have given up.
For me the most annoying part of this story was when the alpha asked when it all went wrong, like sir maybe it was when you mapped out a contract that he should give away 3 kids lets start from there to beginning mapping out the sheer stupidity that was that story.
So far even intk the second season it’s all about the OMEGA ^^
Rereading this from the beginning, I hate the alpha more because stringing along the beta is a lot more damaging mentally than what the omega did. Yes the omega drugged the beta but at the end of the day the beta had to say he was ok with it. Again YES I completely agree using a drug was a POS thing to do on the omegas part but it wasn’t rape. Also even this so called party that the omega will be at and the alpha really wants to see the omega. I BLAME THE ALPHA for that entire shit show because the alphas secretary could have gotten some random beta, why did the alpha need to bring the MC along. Not only that to also repeat what he did on the aquarium date and do the same thing he did last time. If the omega is somewhere he will ditch the beta; eff that to me being strung along is a million times worse, Also the alpha is way to obsessed with secondary characteristics which is why the omega started to hate the alpha as soon as he presented and assumed the omega needed him to become happy. Also let’s recap again the omega has been Pursuing the beta for YEARS. The omega if you reread chapter 40 resorts to this drug because he sensed the alphas pheromones on the beta - the omega knows the alpha well enough that he resorted to such a tactic. ALSO THE OMEGA KNEW THE ALPHA SO WELL THAT HE BROUGHT THE MC TO THE PARTY JUST LIKE THE OMEGA KNEW THE ALPHA WOULD DO!!! Drugging the MC is not the best thing to do BUT athe omega knows the beta so well that ever single person aside from himself the beta literally has no feelings for. For all of us the readers know the omega is protecting the beta in a weird twisted way because he knows the alpha Way better than people realize
I do not trust the alpha and his so called feelings AND how he never picked on the fact that the omega wanted to be treated like a human being just like before the alpha officially presented the omega treated him like. the omega treated the alpha well before the alpha present and after the alpha presented—- it’s the alpha that ruined their relationship for not seeing him as a human but as an object which is what the alpha is doing with the beta. The Alpha needs to seriously grow up, that relationship will always be toxic.
BACK TO the main topic ch 40 while yes again the omega drugged the beta BUT this sex ends up being consensual -Also let’s not forget the omega literally announced his unwavering devotion to always stick to the beta side no matter what happens. The omega even admits that he has had sex two times and ch 40 is the second so Literally the omega ONLY has eyes for the beta and has been around for a long time.
This Also means the alpha is a major idiot for self imprinting without even ever having sex with the omega - I just don’t respect the alpha even more now. Figure out a way to break your creepy self imprint because he doesn’t deserve the Beta.
During ch 40 the omega literally states it doesn’t bother him how many people the beta sleeps with he won’t view him Differently- Ch 41 The alpha basically calls him a slut then later fucks the beta and also knots him while he’s pasted out- If he author at the end makes the beta and the alpha end game I don’t know what I’d do because that relationship is so toxic there isn’t really a way to save it nor would I want to see the alpha even attempt it because he’s a pos and the BETA should never be someone’s second choice he’s not a Consolation prize
I thought drugged people cannot consent. Anyone who’s drunk, drugged, cannot consent regardless of what they said at the time. But either ways Omega dude is less evil than the ML and I root for the omega ML!! Please I hope he and beta ends up together, I used to root for the ML and him but ugh he’s getting on my nerves. Also thanks for the detailed thoughts, I agree
A drug that turns a beta into omega is complete fantasy that is not the same irl drugged. I appreciate concern but that’s a far stretch. Even the omega being drugged that’s not the same it’s not mind altering drugs that exist IRL. This ain’t a drug like Molly, ecstasy, even being high off of weed, or even being extremely intoxicated. This is FANTASY —- IF ANYTHING I could say this is the same as giving someone Viagra
If you give someone viagra - even in court cases it is not viewed as the same as being under the influence.
So again CORRECTION- you can get in trouble for giving someone viagra against their will BUT they can absolutely give consent I can’t believe I had to look this up on law websites for you people so you get your FACTS correct
Law definition: Consent cannot be given when a person is incapacitated. Incapacitation = lack of consciousness, being asleep, involuntarily restrained, intoxicated such that one cannot knowingly choose to participate in sexual activity, or if a person otherwise cannot Consent.
^^ SO AGAIN the beta was absolutely capable of giving consent. Thanks for listening to my Ted talk have a good day
Just because I can already see this coming giving the MC the omega drug - one could argue it qualifies for a case of drug facilitated sexual assault- maybe you can make a case for it BUT the most important part is the beta was able to give affirmative consent. The beta also had the ability to say STOP no more I don’t want this. <—- once those words are stated then you have a real case.
Drug-facilitated sexual assault occurs when alcohol or drugs are used to compromise an individual's ability to consent to sexual activity. These substances make it easier for a perpetrator to commit sexual assault because they lower inhibitions, reduce a person’s ability to resist, and can prevent them from remembering details of the assault. Drugs and alcohol can cause diminished capacity, a legal term that varies in definition from state to state.
No the beta did rape. Drugged people cannot give consent, if Beta wasn’t drugged, his body would not have those alteration and he wouldn’t have willingly slept with the Beta. It’s because he was drugged, he had NO CHOICE but to consent.
Consent that is under body alterations/changes, incapacity is not valid consent/ real consent. Consent is when you choose to do it willingly and because you WANT to.
Beta here did not want to but he felt all these effects from the drugs and the omega dude took advantage and manipulated him, persuaded him.
Just because it’s a different kind of drug does not change anything.
Rape is when you don’t give real consent. Drugged people regardless of what drugs, cannot consent.
The omega dude is already bad enough for drugging him, and now he’s also taken this situation to an advantage and forced consent under the drug effects. That is not real consent.
I don’t know how you think it’s a valid consent when someone is under drug influences. Just because this is fiction doesn’t change anything, still rape. That drug seems to still have real life effects, Omega dude said it himself that it’s a drug for special purposes.
it was just to turn beta to an omega, but the drugs also came with effects of feeling WEIRD. That is same as real life even if the purpose is unrealistic.
Please do not feed the rape mindset. It’s absolutely invalidating to me who have experienced this type of situation and felt the need to get rid of such weird feeling. The beta was not capable, and even if he was, it’s not a valid consent.
The beta himself said that he wouldn’t sleep with another man twice. Why would he sleep with the omega again with consent? He clearly didn’t but was made to consent due to the DRUGS.
Real consent- Willingly doing it under no alternation effects
Invalid consent- Doing it under alterations/any other body changes, it doesn’t have to be mind effected
The beta willingly believed that he could be helped by the omega so of course he went for it. But it’s still not VALID CONSENT.
In Chapter 40 near the end, the beta told the omega to stop but the omega forced him to consent and using word tactics. The omega kissed him without consent, that is sexual assault already.
You looking at websites doesn’t change that it’s not real consent. Real consent is if he willingly chose to do it without any effects on his body/mind.
He was forced to consent. He could have called ML bit that doesn’t change the fact that the beta refused at first until the omega forced him down, kissed him while MC said stop (which is assault already and borderline rape) and the omega manipulated him as well as going as far to lie about his body changes. He FORCED consent.
Beta could’ve masterbated on his own as he said but the omega forced his way through regardless till beta agreed with invalid consent.
And the way you’re really trying to justify the omega drugging the beta is just disgusting and what a shitty mindset. Just because the beta could speak doesn’t make it any less borderline rape.
Yes the alpha shouldn’t have brought the beta to the party but he just wanted to, it’s not like he knew this was gonna happen. Also the way you’re blaming the alpha more here is sickening and the way you’re trying to justify the omega’s bad actions.
Both of them are bad but you’re here justifying the omega.
Again I actually did my research on what affirmative consent is looked up sexual assault and rape cases etc etc. I am not discussing this with you further because you are not comprehending what I’m providing for you. You can make your argument all you want but it will never change the fact that in a COURT OF LAW- just because you feel it’s rape doesn’t mean it was. Even the fact that the omega ASKED FOR CONSENT further lessens your argument to actually call it rape. Also everyone is overlooking how th beta feels- do you see the beta feeling like the omega took advantage of this “sudden fake heat”. The beta doesn’t look at the omega negatively- if anything after this happened he was over joyed by how the omega said he would never leave him. When the beta finds out about the omega drug he is also going to remember how he asked for consent…
I am not going to further respond you have a lovely day
Ch 40 before the sex, the sexual assault did happen. Clearly you didn’t do the right research then. He kissed MC without consent and MC told him to stop, go re read and talk.
Just because the omega asked for consent AFTER the first round of sex which was forced consent by the Omega dude.
Just because your court of law says it doesn’t mean it’s all true, many courts don’t even mention/consider men being raped.
Vice versa just because you feel it isn’t rape doesn’t mean it isn’t any less borderline rape. It may not be rape but it is borderline.
Someone please update this