How the fuck would any legit serious fighting ring allow anyone even strangers or people from the opposite side to ever go near their opponents gym/changing room—— that would never fucking happen and the excuse is beyond idiotic as well as the scene. The 3 people are infront of them and somehow magically one of them gets to the very rear near the medical supplies… how that even happened makes no sense 3 people let’s say in diamond formation approach the ML… ML gives attitude and puts his hands on one of the 3- why would they complete break diamond formation and somehow one of them and go to where the medical supplies are……
I already can guess what will happen next- the ML will confront the MC about the spray hurting him and confront the MC about how he meet with the opposing side…..
ANOTHER NOTE- I would call for officials who took the MC into custody or whatever last time to intervene the fuck out of this before the match- that situation with the changing room is stretching so far for the author, something like that could never happen and go unnoticed like that. LIKE FOR FUK SAKE all the ML needs to do is show pictures of how the coach from
The opposing side had met with his personal doctor that would be enough proof of tampering……..
Also if the villain opponent in the ring- I hope he doesn’t know what his manager did because that makes this villain a punk ass bitch that he can talk all that shit but he can’t walk the walk without cheating 0.0
you're right but if you think about it nothing in this story remotely makes any sense lmao
I mean for the most part a lot of this story can be “real” the idea of an athlete having their own jinx and must to do things before competitions is not far fetched nor having a family member in the hospital and literally doing anything you can for that family member. Also the ML prepping for a weigh in- athletes actually stuff like that. The only things that are too out there for me at least is the usual aphrodisiac drug that is many mangas and manhuas and such a magical drug doesn’t actually exist, the MC being investigated when only he was affected by and it has nothing to do with the ML, and how the new emerged enemy operates. ^_^ but that’s just my opinion
yeah the athlete part is realistic the author has portrayed it the way it actually is irl, but things that don't make sense are jaekyung dropping his fuck buddy to contact dan and made him sleep with him even tho he had a perfectly normal fuck buddy to sleep with, or the aphrodisiac like you said, or dan being able to get 700 goddamn dollars working a part time delivery job lmao, or dan being so so so naive, or the other gym calling dan to ask him for info when they could've called up anyone in jaekyung's gym?
I agree with everything except dropping a fuck buddy to have sex with doc Dan. When you have money you desire things that are harder to obtain. From the chapters that had the fuck buddy I found him annoying but that’s me
i get what you mean, but i feel like it was done for the plot bc like when you think about it doc dan and the ex fuck buddy look similar, face wise and body wise too so like i understand jaekyung wanting to sleep with dan once, but why'd he beat up his old fuck buddy and drop him LMAOOO it was uncalled for poor guy
They look somewhat similar but the ex fuckbuddy personality was really “loose”. The fuck buddy was too eager and sometimes that can be a turn off
What I am saying is it looks a little like the author is trying to sell more copies of this amazing series even if the story doesn’t make complete sense. The last volume with the random high schooler liking the MC was random as fuk, the MC is marked and with his fated pair literally just having a conversation and finding that out is a giant sign to back off because you can’t get between them especially with the MC looking so happy so the thought of the ML being so insecure about believing so much in that fated pair between them is a little odd to me. Since they are mated no one else can smell the MC pheromones so him going into heat technically others won’t be attracted to that and also that would make it go from a case of “the omega seduced me” to becoming a flat out rape case against someone with a paired fated partner
Either way going back to my main thought I know from now on the author is probably going to be using more cliches and very familiar tropes moving forward. DONT GET ME WRONG- I enjoy this series a lot it’s just I was expecting/ hoping for the author to tap into the same magic they had with the first two volumes
The ahjussi should get revenge and do the same back to them. I’m mad that the excuse of “I love you” so it’s justifiable to rape you is used here. The guy with glasses asked for a reply - let the ahjussi give it to you. Also the blonde hair guy is just horny that’s not love he just popped a random boner at least the other character had these feelings for a while….
Not everyone will freak out about his scar when he has a body like that. The artwork was good I just am disturbed with the story line.
I have my own speculations that it’s a power move because she doesn’t have any other children but the ML has already pretty much taken over and the mother is actually powerless against the ML so why is the mother so evil? Also why did she bring up her and the ML father? We haven’t heard about the chairmen in a long time +++ the chairmen stepped down the ML made sure that the chairmen couldn’t get involved anymore so WHY did she bring him up?
If This is based on a novel, please spoil and tell me why the mother is actually the way she is
I know Korea has different laws compared to America- but the father literally left the child and allowed his child to be raised by someone else as well as even name the child for a time of 5 years….. decides one day to come back and says I want to take my kid- it would be considered reckless abandonment on the “fathers” part. I don’t see any court actually taking the son away as well as if the court allows the 5 year old to testify and say who he wants to go with that also wouldn’t go the way he wants. The other part is the brother has time before the actual court case if there was one to fix his environment if need be.
I see that as well like I have no idea what the fathers thinking (also from an American standpoint) :)
Possibly someone is hidden in the basement- possibly to protect that person— and the reason why everyone doesn’t remember anything about a girl is because it’s actually a GUY. Maybe I don’t know hmmmm
Omg maybe they offer a protection service to people and use the gangster vibes as a cover ?!?!??
was I tripping or was there a panel with some mysterious red liquid dripping on something? not sure if they're torturers but they're still gangsters
I don’t remember anything like that but I will reread it tomorrow to double check
Bucket with blood dripping from the sides
Next chapter is more smut and no plot Oh JOY <_<… GIVE me more Effing plot- you want to draw smut cool but add more panels to further the plot.
The MC needs to take responsibility for their actions and realize if they really want something they need to make the appropriate changes to fix things. The MC could have left to America with the blonde guy and everything would have been good with them for the rest of his life ….. so I don’t care anymore really
More smut and of course not exactly more plot development it’s now pushing a second ML WHO HAS NO CHANCE IN HELL UNLESS HE MURDERS THE DOMINANT ALPHA TO BREAK THE BOND because I don’t see him asking the Mc to get to e surgery considering all the risks. If you are such a good friend stay a good friend why the hell you coming out of the wood work 5 years later . You know your best friend is bonded and you had 5 years to try and make a move. The Author continuing to diverge from the main plot with the MC and ML and give us a stupid impossible best friend love is still a major eye roll.
Instead of calling the best friend the MC needs to “ovary up” and communicate seriously with the ML. If you are so stressed out it’s giving you Gastritis you need to let the ML know and start figuring your shit out between the two of you
What I can already see happening next two chapters. the ML surprises the MC who is conversing w it his best friend- gets jealous and Tadah more jealousy sec smut chapter as well 0.0 eye roll
Don’t get me wrong I like this story I just really need more plot.
Same thing I’ve been complaining about for the past couple of weeks and is also an issue I see with other stories this author or artist (dunno which) has worked on Bye Bye had potential to be a good story about recovering from past trauma and discovering new love but the ridiculous amount of smut didn’t leave enough chapters to really dive into characters