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I can fix him (no really I can) (chace’s version)
I can’t stand tristan and I don’t believe he can change. Someone like him cannot be forgiven. He’s not a cocky 14 years old, he’s a whole ass grownup nd still act like this? cmon…. I hoped Chase would’ve end up with a late introduced new character but not… I can’t even understand how Tristan liked him, it seems something made up last minute to give them a “Happy ending”.
Last but not least, I like Delano and Jacob together but I didn’t really understand the brother thing… Jacob while having sex for the first time think about his brother… then later they meet the brother and delano kiss Jacob in front of him… the brother gives his approval… Jacob instantly forgot about the brother and is in love with Delano? Idk… I would’ve like a better explanation of the whole dynamic and Jacob’s feeling towards the brother but overall it’s been a good read, enjoyable and short.