
I can fix him (no really I can) (chace’s version)
I can’t stand tristan and I don’t believe he can change. Someone like him cannot be forgiven. He’s not a cocky 14 years old, he’s a whole ass grownup nd still act like this? cmon…. I hoped Chase would’ve end up with a late introduced new character but not… I can’t even understand how Tristan liked him, it seems something made up last minute to give them a “Happy ending”.
Last but not least, I like Delano and Jacob together but I didn’t really understand the brother thing… Jacob while having sex for the first time think about his brother… then later they meet the brother and delano kiss Jacob in front of him… the brother gives his approval… Jacob instantly forgot about the brother and is in love with Delano? Idk… I would’ve like a better explanation of the whole dynamic and Jacob’s feeling towards the brother but overall it’s been a good read, enjoyable and short.

Actually I don’t really know where to start, so I’m just starting by saying that when he killed the doctor I CRIED… I’ve thought since from the start that his murder would’ve make the plot more interesting but when it actually happened I was speechless and tears started streaming down my face like there’s no tomorrow. I liked all the characters, even Alex. I’m the type of person that likes criminology and studying how killers have in theirs sick minds and I really think the author captured perfectly his essence and emotions,
And last but not least, I really wanted to cry for Clark (Actually, I really did) because it was obvious that he still loved the doctor but let him go for his sake; yes, Clark has his own flaws but I think that him being like that made the character more real… not like some mc that have to be perfectly perfect.
I’m sorry I wrote so much, but since it’s a comic that I really liked I had to write down my final considerations
I really wanted to see the side couple more then that