Wicked December 19, 2019 12:59 am

I’m one and I’m having a difficult time finishing it. Just want some advice

    natalka17 December 19, 2019 1:26 am

    Ask me no more! Please, enjoy. It's getting juicy more in ch. 2 and especially in next ones. Comment if like or dislike!
    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13233418/1/We-need-no-words

    Okarisu December 19, 2019 1:30 am

    Yup, I’m one.

    natalka17 December 19, 2019 1:37 am

    *It sounds bad on the second read ( ̄∇ ̄")
    I wanted to present myself somewhat different. Ask me anything and if you want, read my fanfic, maybe there'll be some answers ;) The juicy stuff is a warning, though. Not everyone needs it.

    Wicked December 19, 2019 5:12 am
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    Okay so I’m writing this https://archiveofourown.org/works/13330632/chapters/30514041. So basically I made it dark and shit and I’m kinda stuck on how to finish it with a happy ending. Like if I do end it with a happy note I’m gonna have to make a complete 180 turn which is kinda unrealistic.
    I’m kinda bad at explaining it. Help!

    Wicked December 19, 2019 5:12 am
    Yup, I’m one. Okarisu

    Okay so I’m writing this https://archiveofourown.org/works/13330632/chapters/30514041. So basically I made it dark and shit and I’m kinda stuck on how to finish it with a happy ending. Like if I do end it with a happy note I’m gonna have to make a complete 180 turn which is kinda unrealistic.
    I’m kinda bad at explaining it. Help!

    Wicked December 19, 2019 5:13 am
    *It sounds bad on the second read ( ̄∇ ̄")I wanted to present myself somewhat different. Ask me anything and if you want, read my fanfic, maybe there'll be some answers ;) The juicy stuff is a warning, thou... natalka17

    Lol no worries!
    I read it and it was good.
    Okay so I’m writing this https://archiveofourown.org/works/13330632/chapters/30514041. So basically I made it dark and shit and I’m kinda stuck on how to finish it with a happy ending. Like if I do end it with a happy note I’m gonna have to make a complete 180 turn which is kinda unrealistic.
    I’m kinda bad at explaining it. Help!

    natalka17 December 19, 2019 11:26 pm
    Lol no worries!I read it and it was good. Okay so I’m writing this https://archiveofourown.org/works/13330632/chapters/30514041. So basically I made it dark and shit and I’m kinda stuck on how to finish it ... Wicked

    It's pretty long and I'm really tired today, so I didn't read it all. The only thing I can suggest is to not force the happy ending, I mean maybe even drop it. Instead, try to make things clear or open. Like maybe a time skip or something. My characters are always getting time to make their opinion and feelings clearer or more complicated, which later I use to change the situation in a particular direction. The complexity of personality could make things easier to push in some ways. I hope I said something applicable :) Good luck with further creation!

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