★Fævy★ want to read (All 1)
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★Mingwa needs to let BJ ALEX go. The amount of references I've seen she used in Jinx is crazy. I literally predicted them having sex and Kim Dan leaving like nothing happened, smh★
They should really look for a novel to adapt from or look for a new writer
They really do.
It doesn't feel like this is getting any better. Right now, they're gonna make them sleep together and Dan will be acting all confused. JUST LIKE THE BJ ALEX PLOT. Honestly, the only problem I have with this yaoi is that it uses it's old book as a reference to what they are making now. Along with the fact that Dan's problems aren't actually getting a depth into it and they will probably remove the problems once Kim Dan and Jaekyung find love with is a Big NO NO.
If you are going to write a plot where the mc has mental health problems, let that consist over the main story and don't use it as a damn "side" story to be trashed.