I only read 18 chapters, but all that happened in those 18 chapters is 2 peoples who can't speak and a few chapters about how they misunderstood everything once again caused by them not being able to speak...
Yo Sachiko, what's your deal? Why ya gotta be so mean? On some of these comments you're responding with nothing useful.
So what if you don't find it confusing? some people do, and the point is that they shouldn't, the uploading of these chapters is confusing in some areas. Heck, the names are changed around from Chinese to English ones. I don't care which they go for, but consistence is key. That can be fixed.
Also, Shades makes a great point. If they did just tell each other their feelings then all the issues would be fixed. "You missed the other characters who are responsible for their misunderstandings" Not really, but once again, if they confess, then those misunderstandings have no basis. Oh she through out my flowers and cake for her birthday.
"Hey Jojo, why'd you do that?"
"Me? I never did that, I never got them, must have been someone else with something against us."
"Hmm, makes sense, glad we talked this out like people are supposed to."
Solves it. Of course, the point of the whole story is these misunderstandings, but it gets to a point where you're just annoyed with them and don't care anymore. This story is getting to that point. If they at least were able to confess to each other and then the story continued with showing how it is difficult for them to be together even after knowing they love each other, it would be easier for the readers to digest.
Why do these comments upset you? Did you have something to do with it? Are you the artist? Or the translator? Are you not able to handle criticism at all? Or are you just a fan who's so in love that they can't let anybody think deeply about a piece? Give these people a break, they enjoy the story, they're just griping a bit about their own personal issues with it. Not a big deal.
The story could have been decent if it wasn't of all the needless fan service, The fan service get bad enough that the author hold back behemoth evolution just so he can stay with the elf longer for more fan service... Seriously, i have seen hentai that had more story than this... Anyway, unless you came here for fan service, stay away from this it isn't worth your times.
Seriously, that's like 10 manga(or whatever this is supposed to be) that had nice cover art and than the art is shitty once you read. This one isn't as bad as some other i have seen, but it's still bad enough that it make it hard to read.