Koto become more and more suspicious as the story go on. Looking back on the first chapter, i didn't think much back then, but now i think she changed attitude quite fast when she learned that he was Miya father, going from talking like she was talking to an acquaintance to pretty much try to seduce him. Since then while it seem like she's trying to support him, it also seem like she's trying to put distance between him and Miya. If what i suspect is true than i think her trying to put distance between them is quite likely since she might hope to hurt Miya even more and the father while she's at it.
For like half the chapter now it feel like the story have been stuck at the same place, sure there things introduced in the story, but none make the story move forward.
I don't like when relationship take too long to develop in a story, but this is way to fast O.O
I mean it's not like they can't make similar story without it being an otome world, even more so when the world being an otome world make no difference at all most of the times.
I really don't like to see that drama tag in there. This seem like it could be a good story even without drama. Hopefully the drama will be well implemented and not only there to make the story longer.
I can't believe so many peoples have gave 5 stars to this. Oh well, this just show how bad is the taste of the average peoples on this site. I do feel sorry for them though, they probably have never read a true good story until now.
Seriously, i think there could have been plenty of stuffs to make a story out off with a girl that know so little and yet right away the author introduce 2 new girls, ruining the story imo.
Chapter 1 was bad, chapter 2 was great, chapter was 3 was ok, chapter 4 was awesome and now chapter 5 is ok at best .