I really would like to be excited for this, but I have seen to many author butch their story in recent years to chase modern trend, to trust a story will be good from just a few chapters.
Also, I hope the author will not let Layla die for drama, I really would like to see the story develop with both sisters supporting each others.
Fr sometimes cliche happy end...is what readers need...we already got stress from real world.. don't make fantasy adding your stress
System is always BS in a story, always there to give free stuffs to MC with little to no effort.
Not only that, but system never make sense from the beginning, where do the system come from? Who's in control? and all that. I do expect fantasy story to be realistic, but I expect story to explain stuffs, and when stuffs appear out of nowhere without explanation it is bad writing.
The girl the MC liked got raped > MC get power out of nowhere> MC want revenge on the guys that raped the girl he liked > MC start raping girls...
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What could he do? They had his hands tied with blackmail and raping his CHF. His first logic was to just kill them in his one off attempt but let's be honest, it wouldn't have gotten him far at all not to mention he be in jail, so a demon shows up and give him a better opportunity to get Karma. Not ideal but at least he'll get his own satisfaction from the pain he endure from them slowly but surely.
Technically from the beginning she could be considered partially blind because she was able to see to some extent because of magic. Then her blindness is fixed later on in the story, that's really disappointing for me and made this story go from 5/5 to 3/5.
I think in technicallity, she is still "blind" in a sense. since her magic is to "see". it's a passive, but i wonder if she would loose it some how again. But yea i get you though it was a liiitle bit dissapointing that she could see again. I wished her girft would be an "upgrade" but litterally they gave her the "max upgrade" right away xD But im glad she can finally see her pretty world.
Most of those who are blind can still see, full blindness is very rare, it's more common for those who are blind to be partially blind. She is still blind, partially blind, she is just using other ways to see.
Among all the shitty harem out there, it's nice to see one that's done right.
Every males characters have their own feeling, and you can see how their feeling develop and change with times. Also, the males do not suddenly become a blank character after they entered the harem and keep their importance in the story.
All that is lacking in majority of harem, which is why I usually hate harem.
Seeing that, this seem like a story that will be going for a really long times. I am not sure if this is a good thing or not.
So many stories that go for far longer than they should be, but when there's a good stories that deserve more it stop :(.
I am happy this did not go for hundreds of chapters, but I think it could have been as good with a dozen of chapter more for a more developed story, instead of rushing the last few chapters.
Makes me wonder if it's just that much better because it is so short? I wish there was more of it but at the same time I love it as is so much! I wonder if we would feel the same about it had it been extended further - idk if it would be the same considering the fact that the twist was in the minor details and would have been made more obvious if it was used any more clearly. I think it was a masterpiece on its own as it is - very beautiful while also being concise and detailed. I love how many details to the story are presented visually rather than in words. It does a really good job at keeping the twist visual and almost undetectable until the end that way.
You might be right, more chapters might not have been for the best, it's so rare nowadays to have story that are done well, that when I finally find a good story, I want more :p
In an era where majority of MC just get their power for free, it's nice to have a character that actually work for getting power.
The story is also quite unique, which is also another things that's rare nowadays, which majority of story more or less just being a copy and paste of each others.
The only thing negative is the translations, not too bad of translations, it's still readable unlike a bunch of other translation out there, but there's still a bunch of glaring mistakes here and there.
This is bad in so many ways... Harem for fan services, stupid concept for adding fan services, battle dragged for way to long for fan services, no worldbuilding because there's no need of that for fan services..
I tried looking at the chinese version, and they only became friend at chapter 40, and as the latest chapter at 54 currently, they have not progressed farther then that.
Thank you for this. I guess I won't be reading this for now