the tls: big bro she saw then went by water river to conrad feel better
iām sorry but- DONT FUCKING TOUCH MANHWA THATS BEING TLāD ALREADY.
i especially hate when they do it without doing the bare minimum which is to spell-check it. ffssssss
i can tell from how the comments are addressing the fact that ppl seem to not taken into acct that tia hasnāt received love her entire lifetime, this includes her past life as well, so she doesnāt understand. this was elementary, very easily understandable if you actually read, understood and paid attention to the story and the characters and what they are like.
(iāve alread read ch 72, i just remembered she did have a hint of suspicion but she didnāt understand it fully nor did she understand why he ācaredā for her.)
i want to read this but i feel like this manhwa will just break my heart into so many pieces. like itāll just be so stressful bc it would be incredibly well written.
iām gonna give my honest review here so please donāt get angry ( ĖĖĖĖ )
the characters all together are a 5/10, which in general sucks.
the mc has an interesting goal which is great, she wishes to protect her brother while also saving the person who could be her demise in the future. sheās quite understandable and relatable but i find it a bit boring how she seems to be developing feeling for the very same reason for her demise all because of his sweet looks. i understand her thought process of, āif i treat him kindly and help release him everything may be okayā but she must be wary of him as he could be using her obvious care and consideration for him as a means to escape and/or betray her. i mean, weāve yet to full dive into his true character and have only seen fragments thus far, so he could be a snake for all we know.
The Brother
: iām not going to lie, i like him. i enjoy his character even though itās lowkey shit. he couldāve been a real brother to the original which is disappointing but it seems he knows that heās neglected her so i appreciate how heās trying his best to look after her and take the negative influences around her away for now. i like how heās relatively soft around her compared to his vassals. other than his relationship with his sister, i think he needs some type of development, even if itās small. his behaviour negatively impacts the country, he needs to thoroughly and concisely make better decisions that wonāt put his country and his citizens in danger, he must also try and gain the trust of his citizens as they seem to view him as āa tyrant that makes their lives difficultā. so yeh he needs development both communication wise as well as personality wise.
The art
is not impressive, i like the brothers design but all the other characters are mediocre and plain. they donāt particularly have any details that are noteworthy or considerably interesting. even the main character has nothing really distinctive about her design which iām a bit disappointed in as she is the main character of this story (not the novel sheās in lol). it also doesnāt help that almost every chapter is in the worst quality.
the translations
as much as i appreciate the updates, iām only up to ch 10 and iām considering dropping it due to the quality of the uploads and panels, but also the translations. if the uploads were clearer and the tls were less choppy then iād consider staying to continue this series but unfortunately not. thank you for you work until now, i hope the TL take some this last paragraph into consideration and improves their works if they plan on doing more than one project, bye bye!ā°(*Ā“ļø¶`*)āÆā”
i agree entirely. i thought that it was a little suspicious because blond dude started to come onto FL more after he overhead her say something about that og clara liked him. also her approach to everything is a little naive and a little stupid? like in that chapter when she asked the maids to see her brother and they clearly told her that he was in a meeting, why would she go in?? like yes, gain influence, but that was just unnecessarily disruptive and rude and then when he kicked her out she was like "oh boohoo he sees me as a nuisance" like NO you shouldn't have interrupted. definitely dropping this, FL bothers me too much.
yeh i see where ur coming from on this, she really does lack consciousness of her actions and doesnāt properly think through situations. as you said, when she disrupted their meeting because she wanted to see him was too naive and just plain stupid, which is also another reason iām dropping this. i wouldāve been fine if she lacked detail in her design and appearance but she also lacks the capability to understand situations and to be able to judge actions, people and scenarios. she doesnāt have any remarkable or memorable personality traits or skills that could be seen as unique and interesting, nor does she hold any intellectual higher standing, sheās just to boring and seems to have less interesting traits than the other characters even though she is the MC.
i wanna ask before i read but, does this have any romance in it? i donāt usually like sub-plot romance in genres like this as authors tend to make the girls fall desperately in love after being saved, and make them very unfairly underdeveloped. i hope he girl on the right isnāt a character like that bc honestly iād love to see her kick some ass, and see how strong she is.
Nah, no romance so far, but mc got Lil sister that basically the damsel in distress character.
i feel terrible for her sisters, i feel bad for her parents but imagine having to hold your mother back as she had to watch her daughter die at the hands of her sister. i love the sisters even though we know practically nothing abt them. i feel bad that her family have to face the repercussions of one childās actions and that fiona has to live knowing she killed her stupid sister.
āthatās a story for another timeā uhm- no i think tf not. EXPLAIN, GO ON, ELABORATE BITC, FINISH WHAT YOU WERE SAYING, DONT STOP WHEN ITS GETTING BETTER
exactly my reaction. just when it was getting good... (āÆĀ°Š Ā°)āÆā§ā§
on a side not doesnāt āthatās a story for another timeā kinda remind you of āthatās a secret iāll never tellā from gossip girl? i havenāt watched it but iām pretty sure itās from that show lol
*note
I haven't watch that show. so I can't tell.. but that line surely sounds like a story that'll never be told (ćļæ£ā³ļæ£)ć
iāve just started reading this again and i really hate these characters.
i liked them at first but now i donāt.
the chick is such a plain and boring character, she has no goals, no accomplishments, no note-worthy wishes or dreams. her backstory is the typical ādid it for the greater goodā but in this case for her family. she has no interesting traits and her personality is boring. she doesnāt want to do anything to improve her familyās living circumstances bc atm theyāre just leeching off of the dukes assets and money. she could be doing so much more but instead her only concern is cleaning. not only that, but i loved how she wasnāt interested in the ml at the start, bc he was actual trash, he treated her like a tool. and all because heās showing her kindness and how much he ālovesā her, she all of a sudden starts catching feelings for him.
next is the ML, he was a problem to begin with and there is really no need to explain whatās wrong with this guy since we all know what his issue is.
While I do agree with you, its a slice of life manga so it's more or less just a feel good type of story with no depth to it
ŹŹāæŹŹ bro THIS? IS A SLICE OF LIFE?
HAHAHAHAHA IKR !! AND i find her fuckin annoying too
omg same i used to like this story but now, after having a double take, its
iām at ch 80-something and iām pissed abt how they(the author) used those stupid fucking pervert dolls (the relics) to get irene and juhyeon to fuck. of all the routes they could have taken, they took the most uninteresting and shittiest ways to āget them together.ā i would have preferred to see their relationship develop emotionally first- like heās just realised that her relapse/risk after she uses her powers is that her desires take over which he realised means she DESIRES HIM, SHE LIKES HIM.. BRO IVE BEEN SHIPPING THEM SO HARD AND U TAKE THE WORSE FUCKING APPROACH TO START THEIR āRELATIONSHIPā FFS. on god iām mad asf. so mad iām taking a break from this till i cool down. ć½(`ŠĀ“)ļ¾
They didn't fuck
who tf. is cutting. ONIONSSSSSSSSSSSS