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I like the story, I looove the art, the author knows really well human anatomy, the skin colours, really well done! (The background not so much, why?) although like in most yaoi the dicks are way too huge and not proportional with the body (come on they have a third leg instead of a dick, sometimes it is just way too much) « oh my god it’s sooo big! How will it fit! ». I hope there will be a character development though, but I don’t really see how the mc falls in love with his love interest, it seems to me a little bit too easy, but also on the same time if the love interest suddenly realises that he loves the MC out of nowhere I would feel it would be a little bit strange. Let’s hope that the story keep getting interesting.