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I am probably very rude by saying this, but the translation is weird. I’m sorry , the translator is probably doing her best (thank you by the way) and yet I have trouble with the dialogues. Also, I think the translator loves very much the manwha because she puts a personal comment on every dialogues, which I find cute but still a little bit too much. There was a translator who put all of her (funny and cute) comments at the end of a translated chapter, with notes and meme, that was very cute and not intrusive. Thank you anyway for the new chapters!
I felt the same
:))
The official translation is so much better than the non official of the same chapter, I could finish the chapter.
I still think that the manga artist never saw a real tululu because it looks like a leg ha ha ha, but if it’s her thing why not :).
Dirty talk in a novel is very erotic, because as a reader, you can imagine what you want around it, but in a comic you really have to find the fragile tension point :not too much, but not too few. Here it looks like the artist had a text and she just draw the text without adapting it for a visual moment, thus it makes it awkward and a turn of. Although I know it is also very hard to draw silence.
I’ll wait for the next official chapters to read how the story develops so far!