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jayost4r created a topic of The Taming of The Tyrant

this story is a yes and no for me…i personally like the possessiveness of the ml so that’s a yes for me. but the fl on the other hand is just…something else…i like her at first but looking at her now..it is quite obvious she GROOMED dylan to do her bidding. and instead of her to run away knowing damn well that man would chase after her, she should’ve just told him the truth and ride it out. the revenge was basically non existent because when she did get her chance to kill the emperor we BARELY saw, it was such a lackluster moment that made me wonder as to why she did all of that just for that moment. and kahu…he is quite useless to the story and doesn’t even serve as a relevant side character..so the author def needs to develop him more or just remove him..other than that the story has beautiful art and a decent enough plot line to pull me through..so yeah..