
Uwahhhh I can’t hold it in!!!! I’m super excited for the next chapter…. Pleasseee pelase pelaseeeee im giggling so hard I live these two?? They’re so adorable :3ccc I seriously hope mc tries to kill himself in da next chapter… how dramatic would dat be… or somerhing ummm self-harmy!!!! Super weird & super unrealistic for me to expect & wish for but I can’t pretend like I don’t hope it doesn’t happen!! I LOVE U AUTHOR!!!! MORE HURT MORE HURT MORE HURT LESS COMFORT!!!!!

And after allat that muscle brained horse still can’t think about anyone but himself?? How incredibly fucked up in the head do you have to be to repeatedly rape someone, lash out at them almost everyday and not care for them at all?
These characters have literally NO depth to them at ALL. That muscle brained horse can only think for itself and doesn’t think consequences are a thing!
Dan is just a soggy dish cloth! After all he’s been through, and the obvious power imbalance he still thinks a game of jenga cancels it out.
Neither of them are capable of thinking about complex stuff, they have zero depth!!!
NOT a good read, do better, author!

So true, this is literally js a retarded stereotype of bottom and top bl’s, top is abusive and rapes ppl for the life of them and the bottom is legit js a little retarded weakling. This story has no flavor AT ALL whatsoever and atp, I’ll just drop this, the author better not even continue the story AT ALL cs its so trash
Idk you guys I actually didn’t mind the ending
I didn't wanna say this cause there's definitely gonna be hate but I agree with you.
can I ask why? I understand people can have different opinions but shouldn't the fact that rape and non-con are disgusting be a shared one among most? I truly want to understand why you don't feel unpleasant with it
I appreciate you asking this in a respectful way
It’s just fiction I genuinely dont understand why people care so much
If ur talking ta me & not da other replier.. I don’t put as much value in fiction as I do in reality. I like drastic things, I like dramatic things, & I also like freakish stuff. I genuinely couldn’t care less if some FICTIONAL character gets raped Hes not real lastly it’s the authors story, they get to decide wat happens!! If people arent okie with their work they should just.. click off.. no need to send rape & death threats ta the target audience.
Hope dat made sense
Bro I wrote a whole assignment essay and now I'm realizing it may not have sent