alright peeps let's make some bets! who wants friend is secretly an alpha and wants his bestie for pride reasons? who wants omega gets kidnapped and alpha has to save him? who wants to put a bet on attempted rape? who wants monster attack in the middle of the chaos? who wants friend is secretly a monster that wants to reproduce with our omega?
love how they were to wait and tried to find a solution to the issues. this is cute. now he is sick again and a god thinks the love muffin is gonna try to take over his godhood. where i am wondering, if maybe our young one is prego. demons are strange beings, more so when one use to be a god.
what is this fruitcake and why is his personality high maintenance? also dude, tell your love muffin sorry, and that you were trying to do a good deed and you want only him!
it is so sad he "died" but it is nice they are together. they keep loving each other. they are so cute together. and now his partner has to wait for him to grow up again.
get the feeling that pyscho mama is lashing out since she was in jasper's shoes before and didn't feel like she could be with her love. since she is more against love than anything else.
oh my, that got rowdy. but that was such a well done being out of control yet at the same time not giving in to the trope of raping your partner.
working though his trauma in real time, that is what the help of the right person does. and that other dom whom thought he was in the right, really started to be in the right when he realized the two needed each other like a person needs air to breathe. them saying they would be exclusive is good and a start to the confessing their love and them getting romantic.
confess your feelings you goomba!!! tell him that you want to date him, both of you. ya both are dancing around it like it is a bomb that is gonna exploded!
time to kiss your love and hug him tons.
the brother part made me want to see him go though more trials and issues to become a better person. not sure he can be, but stories like to try to do that even if it isn't logical.
pretty good at covering how to help someone recover from trauma. it seems each section covers a theme. first was overcoming trauma, and the second one is attachment issues.
so cute, and if they need him to have children as a king he can just have those whom can have babies get magically prego or have magic mpreg situation. there is also adoption.
when you confess your love and they think you are just acting. time to break out the heart omelet
when your love doesn't respond the way you want or expect them to. dude, he is not a mind reader, you got to tell him these things. he might just try to diminish such issues out of professional habit.
the over all message is decent. but the characters were .... odd to say the least. needs a bit of tweaking and it would be fine.
ummm. hmm, is there a story before this? because this feels like the ending or middle of a long story of stuff. that and i am interested in how they got together. it is decent, but i am not sure what the conflict is going to be.
oh my this is so silly but i love it so much. also get wrecked student Council president. you can't get rid of them if they are doing a play. even though they threw people.
dude, just confess that he is your mate and you two can get somewhere besides the twisting in the wind of does he love me?
best chapter for romance and chemistry between the two. still feels shallow and not earned. but at least there are moments in this chapter that shows stuff that would make it worth wild. however this chapter has our alpha acting out of character of what we know of him from the other chapters. if it was expressed that it was a false bravado or something maybe, but the differences are so weird. this story could work with some slight tweaking.
oh, damn, he got hurt because he thought of his love for a moment. hope he heals up fine.