confess your feelings you goomba!!! tell him that you want to date him, both of you. ya both are dancing around it like it is a bomb that is gonna exploded!
time to kiss your love and hug him tons.
the brother part made me want to see him go though more trials and issues to become a better person. not sure he can be, but stories like to try to do that even if it isn't logical.
pretty good at covering how to help someone recover from trauma. it seems each section covers a theme. first was overcoming trauma, and the second one is attachment issues.
so cute, and if they need him to have children as a king he can just have those whom can have babies get magically prego or have magic mpreg situation. there is also adoption.
when you confess your love and they think you are just acting. time to break out the heart omelet
when your love doesn't respond the way you want or expect them to. dude, he is not a mind reader, you got to tell him these things. he might just try to diminish such issues out of professional habit.
the over all message is decent. but the characters were .... odd to say the least. needs a bit of tweaking and it would be fine.
ummm. hmm, is there a story before this? because this feels like the ending or middle of a long story of stuff. that and i am interested in how they got together. it is decent, but i am not sure what the conflict is going to be.
working though his trauma in real time, that is what the help of the right person does. and that other dom whom thought he was in the right, really started to be in the right when he realized the two needed each other like a person needs air to breathe. them saying they would be exclusive is good and a start to the confessing their love and them getting romantic.