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emphasizing what all the other comments in saying this plot sucks. to explain further, the top being trash is not what makes it bad - scummy characters *can* be written well. but not here. the top basically is an overgrown child who despises adults and adult behavior (i.e., having a job. having responsibilities. or when the bottom is tired from a long day at work and doesn’t want to drink and pull an all night after his 9-5. man this bitch (the top) is a real piece of work). literally the bottom will be like “hey you should eat breakfast” and the top will go on some chunni internal rant about how boring the bottom is as an adult (???????) and then all of the sudden, the top (who is literally just shit talking the bottom the entire time) realizes that he’s in love with the bottom out of NOWHERE, and does a 180 where he is suddenly okay with being an adult and getting a job and whatever. what????? man.