I really want the bodyguard to leave LMFSO
It’s like I feel like there’s just not a real reason for him to be here like yeah he “protects her” but the same rules don’t apply as to where he’d be that effective cuz even if he’s “letting her go” he’s really not. He’s still trying to control her and her relationship in some way and the male lead could probably protect her better tbh. I feel like the bodyguard is really just a buffer for her to figure out her feelings and postpone their relationship in a way that makes the story “more interesting” but to me it’s just a bit infuriating.
I don’t hate this but I really wish she wouldn’t be stubborn to the point of self hatred in every chapter. I look forward to seeing her grow and love herself more.
If you wanted an honest opinion, it’s not too bad. The unnecessary drama can get a little bit tiring sense it’s always just so one sided (since it’s all just her self-sabotaging it can get frustrating for a reader to see no development) if you don’t like cheating then this isn’t for you. He cheats in the beginning but he does stop once they get married. That’s the thing as well the marriage was so rushed if that was the case they should’ve gotten married in the first 3 chapters sense the buildup was a little weird to me not to slow though just a bit awkward, perhaps to reflect on the awkwardness and the one sidedness of each aspect of their relationship at the time. Since they were both moving at the best of their own drum. I feel like the past life stuff was honestly sprung into the plot cuz they author wanted to create a different plot point then they had originally gone with, me personally I don’t mind the reincarnation plot if done correctly, but in this story I didn’t find that necessary. If you wanted something that’s just smut then honestly I would say there’s good scenes but if that’s the Only reason then it’s not smut heavy.
I just don’t get why she’s sharing her backstory again like we don’t know the main plot of what happened. There’s no need to tell it in her POV, just stay in present day and get on with the story like I just wanna know what happens with Athena and Blake the whole body switching Yada Yada stuff is so dumb.
I hate how there’s always some “system” in the novels even when it’s not video game based it doesn’t make sense and it just feels like lazy writing.
And novel system always don't help much but tryna momentarily kill u. I don't mind wen the system has some sassy vibe.