beta
its better than i thought it would be, beautiful art and pretty good plot pacing. i do think y’all were gassing up the whole redemption arc though, i feel like there was too much emotional damage caused by jaehyuk for the author to have feasibly resolved in a satisfying way, considering his ‘chasing’ was the last 10 chapters. the only reason his ‘chasing’ worked was because yeonoh still loved him, bro took like no accountability. not to mention that awful rape scene in chapter 58 that yeonoh deserved a formal apology for… ending was definitely rushed but i am looking forward to the side stories!