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Often yanderes are portrayed as "hilariously" (not really) crazy. No, I want yanderes that make me feel scared and aroused, in other words, scaroused. Yanderes should be scary, pretty, violent, in that order.
Also I hate the comment system thingy. The only reason why I even tolerate it is because it somewhat drives the plot forward. But I hate it when authors put "dictatorial" elements in stories, puts too much emphasis on "you already know how this ends right? They get together ofc".