Actually asking if the little one is legal, like bruh she fell in love with a fricking SNOWMAN. How do you eve calculate the age of a kinda sorta human-shaped pile of snow that disappears after winter every year?? In any case since Miyuri made her clearly Miyuri's the older one. Not gonna pull out the "it's fiction" card coz apparently that's not enough for people nowadays.(￣∇￣")
Girl you so pouty lol~ Also the brother immediately felt very scummy, wow. Like it took just a few speech bubbles to make me dislike him. Finally the porter, I like her energy. The smol mentor-looking guy mentioned her strength, so it seems like she's gonna be the big stronk wife-slave type.
I understand that the characters' behaviors are quite annoying, but I still like it, it's very humanizing. I prefer this over cookie cutter portrayals of relationships that seem like they've been shat out from Disney's wholesome butthole. People are all selfish to varying degrees, people are all stupid to varying degrees. It's those shades of grey that make reading manga more interesting. Eri is a bxtch that wants her childhood friend and her "normal" (hetero) life too, but she still makes for an interesting character.
Senpai tho is HOT. It has to be illegal to be that hot omL—
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Commenters acting like Iseul got raped. Isn't this what people call "angry sex"? She kept saying no coz she knows Sori is mad at her. I'm just gonna guess but after the angry sex they're either gonna be awkward for a while or have a fight. The author's
They will definitely be awkward I don’t see this playing out good afterwards
It's a typical story structure really. Starts out wholesome, dips into dark themes, gets even darker, but eventually comes back to being wholesome (well... Fluffy?) at the end. Personally I feel like this isn't that bad yet, like this is literally their first disagreement. Pure hearted Sori found the boss that she likes with another woman and it made her remember what kinda sex life her boss prefers. I imagine that this is the start of what I'm calling the "You wanted sex god? I'll give you sex god" arc lol. I see Iseul being all "wait I want my purehearted Sori back" after the sex, and that's where the next conflict of the story is gonna be. Ofc I'm just guessing based in how the previous stories I've read were structured.
Frankly tho, compared to the author's other work THIS IS STILL VERY WHOLESOME. XD In the author's other work both top and bottom were horrible people, top was just more horrible.
These are giving me so much stereotypical fanfic vibes I can't xD And that chapter in the elevator— like bruh it's so hard for me to "bend" the girls I like, turns out all I needed was to give headpats in a dark elevator... And tons of rizz I guess.
Welp it's fiction for a reason!! (╬￣皿￣)凸
Eri is definitely one of those "oh shi I was gay this whole time?" sorta people. But I get it, she treated Fuyuki like a dear friend, like a sister this whole time. It's not easy to recognize the difference, I guess.
This author bruh, I checked out everything they made that's on this site and wow, everything was beautiful. Not only that, it was angsty too. Love this sorta writing over fluff pieces. I love angsty, and/or toxic yuri. The stuff that makes me think about my gay life. Idk, I guess I like stressing myself out? (￣∇￣")
"That too is love" basically. Can't really explain it better than that. Sometimes people will hurt each other in the name of love, and sometimes it will look very awful in the eyes of others, but as bad as it is, that too is love. The only issue with these sort of things is if it's too much, and that varies from person to person.
That "ML is actually a girl" subplot is soooo unneeded imo, why couldn't she just be a guy? I can take hetero couplings in yuri/yaoi, it's better than making every single character gay. If it weren't for that fact that straight couples are the only one who can procreate I think author would've turned even the parents gay lol. I'm menhera but not crazy enough to forget that most humans are straight.
I think they do it in yaoi more than yuri but yeah I get it.I mean it's a fiction but still that is just too unrealistic for me.... Like what do you mean she is a girl just cross dressing.
History has many examples of women successfully cross-dressing as men, its not that unrealistic. Either way, I don't think the author cares about realism it it is literally set in the MC's fictional webnovel. I can't remember if the cross-dressing subplot was in the MC's original webnovel or one of the ways the characters are different from her webnovel but I think it works for the manic gay soap opera tone of the story. This is one of the gayer manhwas currently being published so its a little silly to come looking for heterosexuality here.
Look sorry if I offended you ok I have no problem with cross dressing. What I meant to say that the author wanted to make everyone gay here like you said tried to set the manic soap opera tone so the only way author was able to do that was make the male lead actually a girl who was cross dressing to make him seem like a man and I'm not trying to find heterosexuality in a gl or bl manhwa. I just was replying to the other person that sometimes the authors do it a little too much.
I get your point but ig it doesn't really matter here because the story itself doesn't have much logic or realism involved although it's kinda weird that after completing the story setting the author reveals ML to be an FL actually and feels like a forced plot twist
That is exactly what I was trying to say it just felt so forced beacuse the author tried to make it look like a plot twist but if it was shown from the start that it was something the novelist aka the the black haired fl has added to the novel for extra drama and we readers have known that but not the other characters it wouldn't have look so weird... I hope you get what I'm trying to say.... [My English is worse than an elementry kid]