An angsty masterpiece and a must-read for everyone*^*
I just noticed at the end how Ian's nipples are drawn beautifully and Ray's are just two circles lmao besides that, this story was sooo good, I love the ending, it's all so well done and there's nothing that I would've wanted done differently ♪(๑ᴖ◡ᴖ๑)♪
Wow, this was such a stupid and ridiculous story, I regret reading this as far as I did in hopes of it getting slightly better, but it never did (￣ー￣)
Sorry, but that translation is horrendous. I appreciate the efforts, but I feel like I'm missing half the plot, gonna drop this I guess ಠ_ಠ
The story might have confused the hell out of me, but I still cried like a baby at the end (´༎ρ༎`)
Idk if I'm just not in the mood to read or what, but there's just TOO MUCH TEXT and the plot doesn't make up for it, as in it's not very interesting ;-;
It's a shame you did not get the plot it really funny