Read it till chapter 2 and it felt like a chore. The plot doesn't make sense in any logical way of thinking.
The girl wants to save her friend once more after her dying in a car accident. But instead of regressing back into the past she regresses into the story and then decides that if she doesn't follow the storyline the story will break apart out of nowhere. As she wants to go outside to find the original ml she gets arrested because the king decided there is a witch in her village. One guy abuses his power and wants to kill a family. But she recognises one of the supporting cast and tries to negotiate with him by talking about how he hates the king openly(?)and he decides that abusing ones power should not be tolerated after almost doing the same..
I don't recommend it for it's story. This pace is so fast, most of the translation is mid tbh and it is not as bad as a kids story you made up but worse but it's not something that makes much sense in character and action wise.
Am I the only one that finds the translating orders confusing? It always feels like we jumped from one to another scene without any context. Or is the story like that?
I feel like the issue is both
It does tell us where in the timeline is girlie. It’s following each girls individual perspective first, which is reasonable for a story with multiple contrasting perspectives. Rn we are following drill curls while ch 1&2 was the setup for the perspective even though it does fall later chronologically in the timeline.
That yuni cheated was bad. I don't like her for doing that and I don't think Nanase is any better for
1. Not thinking about the feelings of yuni whenever she forgot, tried to hide or thought it was 'too obvious' and as such making yuni question whenever Nanase even liked her.
2. Accept that cheating bitch.
But I can understand what Yuni is feeling rn and I love the artist/author for this story. Yuni NEVER even could go alone with Nanase to even a festival and after there was a strict line of "no this would be too obvious" where as the volleyball team friends could do it. So Yuni had the frustration of "hey, I'm your fucking girlfriend and they are your friends. So why can't I?" And after being swayed by Fuuko, that has some kind of love deprived thinking, Yuni cheated and as soon as Nanase finds out she becomes totally affectionate??
Like girl c'mon if you're scared of Yuni cheating again then why did you decide to give her a 2nd chance? There is no way Yuni wouldn't think that. I actually believe that in this chapter the last part yuni wasn't an asshole of a girlfriend but more like a person not being able to talk freely about the feelings she had since the beginning of this manga.
Everyone is hating on Yuni or Fuuko.
But I rather think that every character here needs to learn.
Fuuko needs to stop and think if love is that what she needs.
Nanase is too focused on the view of others and should learn that this is her live and other may not react that way.
That bff needs to learn to actually mind her business sometimes.
And Yuni has the thought of Nanase not loving her and is too anxious. Please trust your partner that they love you even if you're not their live and showering you with love. And please TALK. COMMUNICATION IS KEY TO A RELATIONSHIP. (ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻
love y'all and hope Christmas will be fun for you tho ( ◜‿◝ )♡ rest well and don't do all nighters if possible.
A Nun being a vampire and someone suddenly seeing her is a good beginning. But then we see that they somehow know each other he goes into her house and washes up and then they even begin to imply to have fun in the bed? Where the hell is the plot going and why are we just thrown into it?
It ended nicely and didn't do much drama. Just a healthy relationship with not much misunderstanding or continuation of something that shouldn't be stretched so long in the plot. (◍•ᴗ•◍)
Although I wish to see more of them in the future and the ending with the family could have been better made (thy look more like small children then bigger siblings Σ(っ°Д °;)っ ) I still think that this was the best possible place to end it.
Art 9.5/10
Plot 8/10
I only read for the notes of the translator the story didn't make sense to me and she's a possible pedophile(?)（￣へ￣）the translator made it a 100x better I love their notes ( ◜‿◝ )♡
First I wanna say this is absolutely ridiculous and how did MC just did a complete 180 for ginger? ಠ︵ಠ
2nd. If we look at the cover/introductions and interactions I think it's right to assume Peggy will be the female lead.
Here's why I think so:
The cover shows all 3 MC, Ginger and Peggy but while ginger is hugging MC on her waist Peggy's head is hold from the MC and maybe even pushed near to MC + MC looks at her (picture is a bit pixelated so take this with a grain of salt). Showing who is acknowledged more. An example for this is almost every historical mahnwa with 2 or more love interests, where the male lead often holds the hair/hand or even is looked at from the girl.
The instructions were peggy then ginger. And ginger was not introduced to MC without peggy in the scene where as ginger wasn't there till later chapters.
The interactions in general are almost always about the murder or their intercourse I cannot with this mahnwa (ب_ب) but peggy was cut into the first ( and hopefully the last) intercourse with ginger and MC where she thought if MC and waited for her to change her mind and possibly come back. On the other hand peggy and MC had their own scenes and we're never disturbed on them with other if I remember right. And back to the last scene with Peggy thinking about MC - why would it have been put there if peggy wasn't the 1st love interest?
I find it hard to believe ginger is the female lead in any possible way other than that the author of lily of the valley/btd wrote it but then it wouldn't have been structured like it is and we did not have the detective in this story. So I think saying peggy is the love lead would be right.
Thanks for reading it all if you have (๑╹◡╹๑)/
I've recently found a a harem Yuri manga that had a man in a woman's body and I was scared for my life this would be too but damn this is funny (≧∀≦) the artstalye and plotline of her always dying sold it for me
I see cats. Me happy. Me click. In the end I'm even more happy. 10/10