It felt rushed but I actually liked the characters quite a lot.
Ahh want to read but police officers who jump to conclusions are actually like a problem. Icky
What a stupid way to ruin an interesting story. Like the author knows it’s noncon, it has a warning so they literally know it’s rape. WHY WOULD YOU PUT THAT. Like why would you make that conscious decision “im going to make this otherwise wholesome character become the literal worst human being.” Like I actually don’t understand.
So uhh, when are they gonna remember mc is literally gonna die
Wait what? He just liked him this whole time?
Ok rant time- this trope pisses me off sometimes. Authors will imply literally not a single time that a person likes another character, in this case blonde dude, and then will suddenly put dialogue that SAYS oh I’ve liked you this whole time. Like that’s not how good storytelling works, you can’t just suddenly put that line in and expect the reader to just be chill with it now when you have done nothing to show that. Kinda like how JK Rowling just said Dumbledore was gay and Hermione was black the whole time.
This blonde guy clearly didn’t like him in the beginning, and had multiple girlfriends. The way the story treated the blonde guy made sense in the beginning, he was angry that the mc kept getting his girlfriend’s attention. There were ZERO hints that he felt literally anything else towards the mc. I thought the sudden change in heart would at least have some type of explanation like, “oh I thought you were awful but then I found out you weren’t so bad” IDK ANYTHING BUT NAH, he just liked him the whole time and completely didn’t show it. Rather than disliking him, it just feels like bad character writing on the author’s part.
This isn’t the only series this happens in btw, this is just one example. Like lowkey “Why Are You So Kind To Everyone Except Me?” Has this too, but it’s got a lot of other bigger issues. ANYWAY RANT OVER
It was all cute and wholesome until that one bit - that escalated so quick lol
Me as an older sibling fr I do that all the time to my brothers
They’re dynamic is perfect, not a single thing I would change l
I really like this, but like I really wish they weren’t 15. That’s like really young. But I have free will and it doesn’t affect the story so I’m just making them 18 in my head.
WHAT they just never talked it out and we got a whole ass time skip??? That’s like being shoved into a pool as a prank and they just gave up and drowned LIKE TRY A LITTLE GODAMN