Just wanna put that out there at the very beginning I said I cannot trust that yellow eye DUDE. I ALWAYS KNEW SOMETHING CRAZY WAS GOING ON BEHIND THE SCENES. Telling yall it’s the nonchalant ones
Wdym the end??? I thought we were in the middle of the story like bruh. It feels so rushed and now that I’m looking back on it BORING.
Maybe I’m just saying this cause the chapters are being updated and I’m taking like a week to read them but that took a turn fast. Like I was expecting it but damn lil dude gave me the creeps.
I think Todd is the bottom, I could be wrong but the cover page literally shows him on the bottom maybe I’m wrong it could be something like The Pizza Delivery Man and the Gold Palace
At first I called the dog “fuckass” “dumb” “annoying” all of that stuff and I don’t take it back but in this chapter the dog was tolerable and I actually enjoyed it’s presence.
I feel like the dog is the authors self insert, which just pulls me out of the story. It really could have “plot device” plastered on its head. Like, why not make a friend with their own personality and story that the MCs talk to about their thoughts/feelings if you need to move the plot along. I feel like the dog is annoying and lazy writing :/
i kinda agree with u but i think its just 50% self-insert, mostly on the monologues, since it had a hand in major plots points (e.g. battery incident, evidence to tampering). but its funny how its got a plot armour which absolves it from mischief and lurking around despite being a monster under supervision lol
ISNT THAT, THAT ONE FREAKY AHH DUDE FROM THE BEGINNING CHAPTERS THAT EVERYONE WAS CALLING HOT? IF SO I KNEW THAT YELLOW EYE MF WAS EVIL IM JUST SAYIN
RIGHTTTT I KNEW SOMETHING WAS OFF ABOUT HIM
This was one of the cutest things I’ve ever read and I’m so glad I stumbled across it. To be able to tell such an amazing story in like 9 chapters is absolutely amazing! I wish the author great success in the future! ヾ(☆▽☆)