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This is definitely one of those Mantua where the r@pe has no business being there and is completely unnecessary. I just don't get it, you can write him as a psychopath and have a terrible personality. But any cute or wholesome things that happen later, just dissipate when you think about how the story started. This is a story, this is BL, this is nowhere near realistic but some things are just too unrealistic to get past sometimes.
I just don't understand this author's thought process whatsoever, I've seen this happen so many times. The r@pe doesn't even make any sense from a writing standpoint. It's like these authors just put it in for the hell of it or we're going to do something completely different but now it's too late. Like thanks for ruining something that could have been not s***.

I kinda wanna give this a chance because ppl in comments seem to like but the r@pe so early was shit. The author didn't try to make it sexy, didn't even really show it and made it feel like how r@pe u know actually is horrible. If the author wanted us to hate or dislike the seme from beginning, their are other ways to do so. Or if the author wanted the uke to hate the seme they wouldn't have to do much as he was already a cop. Why am i 10 chapters in and the uke is already Lowkey chummy with seme.
I get that seme has gone through a lot, has been alone for a while and would unknowingly get used to another person's warmth. But as a reader it just feels really uncomfortable, r@pe is not anything new in BL but I really don't like it when we play it for laughs. Unless the seme later on in the story is on his knees begging for forgiveness and crying, I don't understand why anyone else should like him. And you know what you're allowed to like psycho crazy guys girlies, if that's the book boy you want to smash go ahead.
I'm also just not having a good time because two chapters in uke r@pe seme and after that all we get is BS investigative dialogue that I don't care about from the r@pist seme. And of course in between that little tidbits of the seme finding himself going back to the flower shop cuz he is already down bad. I don't know I just feel so bad for the uke.

Nah man I already wrote a whole essay about this and let me tell you. The journey may have been rough but God damn it, it's worth it.

You know what people the beginning of this is ass, but sometimes we have to let the author cook. I don't know if this is their first work but the beginning of this is very rough. I would even say horseshit, however, this ends up being really funny and when I tell you the top is so down bad. Not obsessed because there is a difference, but this man is so down bad it should be a crime.
I would say this really starts to get good around 20 chapters but it stops being horseshit at like chapter 15 maybe. What was really annoying in those first few chapters is the fact that. The top was trying to get revenge because bottom pushed him slightly so that he could shut his house door. Mind you the top was being rude for no reason and hella judgmental. Also and this does change a bit later the art isn't bad but it isn't that great at conveying emotions. In the beginning you can guess what they're feeling but I shouldn't have to guess.
Also bottom seems like your typical stupid innocent type and he is but later it is like the best thing. When I tell you this man, we'll sleep with somebody and give zero f****. It's great, peak comedy, never been done before lol. Also this is just something I find Lowkey great, the top would sell his soul to give the bottom head. When I tell you I've never seen a top want to suck a bottoms dick before, as much as this guy, it's ludicrous but also perfection.

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Top is unintentionally a manipulative prick. If this were real Life the tops actions would be on purpose to try in guilt the bottom into making the him feel guilty about the tops actions. Honestly, without all the manipulative writing of characters and SA that really didn't need to be there I would really like this. Solid six chapter manga but I guess the author wanted there to be spicy in every chapter. And they chose the laziest way to do so.

From Fujoshi Bitches:Katsura and Katsuraya, two rivaling well-established Japanese sweets shops, are...

Ppl wild for justifying the crazy, not that crazy top is anything new but this situation little different. I don't know why but I also noticed how crazy these mc/bottoms be. A mother f***** just stabbed you and bottom be like "no oooo he had a troubled childhood and I broke up with him, he has no idea how to take no for an answer it's not his fault". If I was his friend, I'll be looking at this b**** like he was crazy. I wouldn't even care what happened to him at that point, I would just stop being his friend.

I will give props to the author though because the transition from somewhat crazy to complete psychopath was done very well. From the get-go we're curious as to how we get from point a to what we see in the prologue. I don't think the author is bad at writing, I just think nobody would would be friends with these people.

This shit is mad wacky, author is wild... Art good tho

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Honestly, didn't think we were going to go with the kidnapping route because it seems lazy. Even for a one shot, I think they could have just gone with something else. I personally thought it was going to be that he was only sleeping with the other guy because he had something on him or he had this big plan. And that either boss had already liked said person but got turned extra horny from the other dude. Honestly, this could have been like a solid 30 chapter smut bl, Little disappointed. I don't know it just feels weird that we would have all of this backstory and drama for the first chapter. Just for it to be a three chapter kidnapping and not even a good kidnapping trope.

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Born into debt with runaway parents and pursued by debt collectors, Ja-seong finds refuge with gangs...

When I say I want to read a smut story this is what I mean. Not some half baked creepy crazy cringy story with the author trying to justify the stupid stuff that happens. A story that is just meant for the smut.

"For not coming for a whole week... I'll help you come seven times to make up for it."...

So I read this back when it first came out and after rereading it up to like chapter 13. I have realized this is really bad... Like after rereading it the teacher feels super creepy, I think it's partially how the author did his dialogue. Because I know the teacher isn't actually a bad dude and this is a b******* BL world rules. Like if we go back into the earlier chapters where they first do the deed. The way that he asks the uke and his face scream creep. How did he come to the conclusion that his student was going to sexually assault him. Why did he then jerk off his student? Why did he do any of the things that he did? It almost feels like a bad creepy gay stereotype.
Even if the uke is 18, just a lot of the seme's dialogue and actions are wild. Like an earlier chapters he says this one line " I can't help but thinking rebellious kids are cute", which would be a totally normal line to say. If he wasn't f****** a said rebellious student, and makes it sound like he's done this before. Obviously, he hasn't but God does it sound like he has.
I'd also like to point out that there are plenty of BL that wait until the student has graduated or even like gone to college or something. I also read this when I was like 17 and when ur 17 you don't notice certain creepy shit.

So the younger brother is definitely a sociopath but written actually not bad. It seems that it's evident ever since his childhood that he couldn't really feel anything for anyone. Other than his adopted older brother. What I find interesting is that things that would typically be a red flag and other sociopathic obsessed male leads, there's like weirdly an explanation for it. For example, he constantly tells his older brother to just stay in the house and he'll take care of him and there's no need for anything else. Now typically that would be the worst thing in any other BL. However, here the older brother is a nymphomaniac vampire and whatever he leaves the house monsters try to give him blood I don't know. So the younger brothers worries are actually very warranted and the older brother is your typical stupid Uke. So he never listens when he should and for some reason hasn't realized that his brother is a sociopath.
What I find interesting, is that if they weren't in this monster written world. I think the younger brother would actually act somewhat normal. Unlike other sociopath Seme's he seems to actually care for his love interest. Obviously we're only 11 chapters in and to be honest I won't continue reading. Well maybe because I'm curious about the older brothers relationship with to the monsters. Although, he does have the typical mindset that his brother is his. I feel that it's more rooted in the situation that they're in and that they're really isn't anyone that would properly take care of Seme's older brother. I think you would still have an obsessive mindset but I don't think in a non-monstrous world that he would ever Force his older brother to do anything.

Hella cute this chapter (40)
Wasn't expecting him to say that lol
Also I forgot how much I love the dialogue, it so realistic ngl cuz the dilemma of telling your boyfriend "you want to smash without sounding like a nympho" is too funny

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