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This isn't technically a one star read but I'm just so disappointed with the author. Now at first, the story being an absolute mess and making no sense wouldn't matter. This is because the story might just seem like a smexy, for sex only type of bl. However, there's like actual intriguing plots and backstory. For example, why the string got cut and then tied. Why top/blong guy is so desperate to see ghosts and why are main character even wants to act again etc. the author however just goofs everything, are poor baby boy main character dumb as hell. Not cute dumb, not silly dumb, not even annoying dumb but author writing character to do dumb things for no reason. Just because the blonde guy/top wanted to go to the hotel does not mean he had to go to the hotel. No the reason for the hotel isn't just so they can smash because it happened so early on and there will be even easier dumber chances for them to smash anyways. Especially after the MC has leverage over blonde guy/top, that blonde guy wants to see ghosts. He magically doesn't realize that he has leverage, and try to just straight up talk to the guy. Now even if top were to tell MC everything, I'd like to point out the story could still go on. Because MC already sees blonde guys trash, and despite that he needs him so that MC can act. They would still have to meet and smash anyways. I'm just frustrated because this can still be smexy b******* and have an actual story but the author just said "why do that?". And this is just my personal opinion but I feel like those first 15 chapters could have been like 10/20 . We had events that would usually be arcs happened so fast and have no effect on the story whatsoever. I feel like we could have had their interactions be more mysterious and have their chemistry build, cuz no offense there is no chemistry in chapter 6, because it was chapter 6 in the author is maybe new at this who knows?
Sorry for writing a paragraph I just feel like this is such a waste of a solid idea for a BL. I know that apparently blonde guy/top is the worst after looking at comments but still.