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Very good but story is a bit all over the place. It is fine at first but it started to feel a bit convoluted after blue rangers death. Explanations of the lore or how things came to be are very stretched out and not fully explained enough. Like will get the dream world arc or competition arc paced perfectly, great story telly, etc but then the in-between bits don't compare. Those arcs/chapters feel fully fleshed out and help me to understand D better growth wise but afterwords everything else is way to jumbled together for me.