The art isn't bad or anything but I don't know if it suits the story. Not going to lie I stopped at chapter 1 but just because I don't think I'll be able to enjoy it further. I feel like the story is going for something more comedic but because the art is so "pretty pretty princess" it takes away from the story / comedy.
Also not going to lie that synopsis is so basic of an author to put out. It isn't even one of those, the basic plot of every story ever etc. because the plot / synopsis is literally what is already expected to happen lol. I was so perturbed by this, like how can somebody put out something that basic and that's what made me actually interested in reading it.
This isn't technically a one star read but I'm just so disappointed with the author. Now at first, the story being an absolute mess and making no sense wouldn't matter. This is because the story might just seem like a smexy, for sex only type of bl. However, there's like actual intriguing plots and backstory. For example, why the string got cut and then tied. Why top/blong guy is so desperate to see ghosts and why are main character even wants to act again etc. the author however just goofs everything, are poor baby boy main character dumb as hell. Not cute dumb, not silly dumb, not even annoying dumb but author writing character to do dumb things for no reason. Just because the blonde guy/top wanted to go to the hotel does not mean he had to go to the hotel. No the reason for the hotel isn't just so they can smash because it happened so early on and there will be even easier dumber chances for them to smash anyways. Especially after the MC has leverage over blonde guy/top, that blonde guy wants to see ghosts. He magically doesn't realize that he has leverage, and try to just straight up talk to the guy. Now even if top were to tell MC everything, I'd like to point out the story could still go on. Because MC already sees blonde guys trash, and despite that he needs him so that MC can act. They would still have to meet and smash anyways. I'm just frustrated because this can still be smexy b******* and have an actual story but the author just said "why do that?". And this is just my personal opinion but I feel like those first 15 chapters could have been like 10/20 . We had events that would usually be arcs happened so fast and have no effect on the story whatsoever. I feel like we could have had their interactions be more mysterious and have their chemistry build, cuz no offense there is no chemistry in chapter 6, because it was chapter 6 in the author is maybe new at this who knows?
Sorry for writing a paragraph I just feel like this is such a waste of a solid idea for a BL. I know that apparently blonde guy/top is the worst after looking at comments but still.
OMG, I agree! Some people might think and say that it's just not our cup of tea or if we don't like it then don't read it, well I guess that might be true tho...
Honestly, I love the art and the horror/supernatural plot, but I think the author could make a better character development and chemistry.
At first I thought the MC was pretty cool, but suddenly he turns into a dumbass when he's with the blonde guy, their chemistry isn't built well so the smut scene doesn't feel heart-pounding to me.
It's not the worst story for me, but I think it has the potential and could be much better if it's not so rushed and make the characters act more logical.
omg ty, I know right, more than anything I'm just disappointed cuz I think this could have been really good.
Yes, I think so too. But I guess I'll keep reading it because the art is beautiful.
I completely agree I feel like this art and storyline has been wasted. They’ve built up the mc to be such a complex character but he just acts dumb when he’s with the blonde guy and never fully gets his plot-progressing questions answered. If the author wanted the story to revolve around smut they should’ve done that. Instead it feels like they’re trying to make such a mysterious plot but literally don’t progress it at all. Tbh it feels like the story has regressed to just smut. Unfortunate because it had a lot of potential and the mc had a lot of potential to be a great character but he’s been devolved to being stereotypical dumb bottom that can’t get enough of the good-looking top which is seen in literally every other bl story.
It really is a shame
Yeah, it seems like the plot is half baked like this, what a waste...
Would give this no stars if I could, but I can't. I don't feel like writing an essay today as to why this is ASS. I stopped like chapter 9 and I really don't care if it's gets better. I don't care if esper/top was kidnapped and had his body ripped apart and then was revived. I don't care about his suffering, or any stupid redeeming that the author might do later. If you want to write bad p*** in smutty stories that's fine but don't try and take yourself seriously and do a whole story. I'd also love to point out that the moment the guide is the bottom, they have no power in the relationship. I've seen in other esper bl's, that the top is the guide and the bottom is an esper. But the moment the bottom becomes a guide it's the worst thing ever. Lol
Can u give me some recommendations where the top is the guide? I’ve read pretty lot guideverse and most of it (almost all of it) the bottom is always the guide except Guiding Hazard. Honestly that manhwa is how guideverse supposedly written. Just like you said ╥﹏╥
i want some too
Metropolitan Nepenthes, can't remember the other one
Metropolitan Nepenthes, can't remember the other one
Very good but story is a bit all over the place. It is fine at first but it started to feel a bit convoluted after blue rangers death. Explanations of the lore or how things came to be are very stretched out and not fully explained enough. Like will get the dream world arc or competition arc paced perfectly, great story telly, etc but then the in-between bits don't compare. Those arcs/chapters feel fully fleshed out and help me to understand D better growth wise but afterwords everything else is way to jumbled together for me.
It still has your typical Omega versus tropes but there's a lot more backbone to them. like everybody knows the first time they have sex is because the Omega goes into heat or something in the alpha is"has" to smash to came him down. This time of the Omega was drugged by people who he thought were his friends. The alpha technically only does the dirty because the Omega is a mangaka and heats last week and the deadline is soon. So it was consensual and the comedy, lightens the mood as well.
I like the plot, wish it was longer...
After the fourth chapter I was like, did I miss a whole Arc or something? How did we get here but then it seems like it's a short story BL. Although even for that seems kind of compressed, other than that author gets my type lol.
Some things should just stay on, Wattpad no offense to Wattpad. At least omegaverse knows the majority of it is dumb but like half of this doesn't make any sense. If the blonde dude/top/alpha was an Omega when he was a kid and bottom/black hair is an alpha why did top even become an alpha. Unless he was forced to become an alpha there was no reason to change on purpose. Also why did black haired guy/ bottom have to be an Omega in the first place for them to f*** or be anything together. No matter what Omega versus story it is alphas can be together in any of them. We've seen one where it's Omega-Omega and beta -beta. From what it seems like black haired guy hurt the top in the past but probably not enough to turn bottom into an Omega for no reason. I think it's pretty evident that the bottom has always cared for the top. Why doesn't the top just tell him who he is? If he told him who he was he probably wouldn't have even had to turn him into an Omega and assault him. This just has plot hole on plot hole, and everything that's happening makes no sense. If they just wanted to do Omega versus p*** story that's fine. But how can it only be five chapters in and immediately be like "wtf is happening?". This isn't to say that essay isn't this isn't to say that essay isn't this isn't to say that essay isn't this isn't to say that SA ain't anything new in omegaverse but they clearly cared about each other when they were kids. The bottom is clearly looking for the blonde guy/top and if he had just told him he was they probably would have just ended up as a couple. But apparently and the world BL r@pe is the only form of revenge... Also blonde guy/top was clearly an Omega when he was a kid and went through things. He even talks about it when him and main character are talking about the trait changing drug. So why is he referring to the bottom and just omegas in general in such a depriving way? It just doesn't make any sense to me. Everything is just so contradictory and pointless and frustrating.
From what I gathered blonde guy was raped as a child before he ever presented as an omega. His percieved "omega qualities" paired with abandonment made him bitter. Once he presented as an Alpha perhaps his life got better and he made a name for himself. I think he wants black hair MC to suffer what he suffered. So he changes him into an omega and rapes him as a form of payback.
And see I could essentially gather that or at least something similar to that happened. But it still don't make no sense ?? Like why he wanna hurt him? didn't even try and ask bottom why he did what he did? I can totally understand wanting to make some smutty BL but the story is whack and all over the place. For me personally it just totally takes away from the getting down and dirty scenes.
Well from the signs I've read blonde guy is clearly mentally unstable. He latches onto certain things. When those guys said he had been abandoned it just confirmed his own fears. He just accepted that as fact and I'm sure when he hears the truth he will react irrationally instead of remorseful. He is a whacko for sure
That what it looks like and I'm here for the drama! He is so blindsided that he can't put two and two together. That's ok because we will continue to see how this plot goes! Revenge is a dish served cold!
That what it looks like and I'm here for the drama! He is so blindsided that he can't put two and two together. That's ok because we will continue to see how this plot goes! Revenge is a dish best served cold!
In the beginning they said he was an omega.What if he used that drug on himself to become an Alpha? I can't wait to see how this goes.I wished we lived in their world.The scientists said the sperm count is so low that a woman won't be able to become pregnant in the near future. I wouldn't mind living in the omegaverse if it becomes real.Alpha,Omega,Beta,and people who can switch their traits. I think it will be awesome! In the story,the blond haired guy is trying to make it where Alphas and Omegas are seen as equals!
I mean the white hair guy / top actually has a solid crazy person backstory. Namn or the guy that we see with the piercing later is hella adorable and Loki perfect for top. I don't even understand why the author put that whole Arc just for us to feel bad for Namin. If they wanted the top to go through all of that it could have just been some s***** person or extra we wouldn't care about. Also bottom or brown-haired guys weirdly enough the craziest person out of all of the characters. If I was a dude and woke up with the vagina, and the person who supposedly did this to me (I don't think there's an explanation for this by the way) who gives a f*** about how society views men I need to go to the hospital. Also this smexy scenes are very smexy in the top despite everything is so adorable. I also like how we were given a top that you know blushes and actually has emotion during sex. It's like 80% of this is technically trash and makes no sense but 20% of it is kind of excellent. I despise the author for this and this review is pointless just like the story that makes no sense.
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Don't really care if that count as spoiler cuz waste of a good story and art... From what I remember they aren't blood related if I'm wrong they half sibling or somethin. Either way sibling romance are always a stupid waste of time.
Also this would have been fine if they grew up separately , didn't know who each other were when they would interact and got closer. So then it would also be kind of like a mysterious thing and you know if they just didn't refer to each other's brother and sister. I'm pretty sure even when they're both younger, they know they're not blood related. And I get why would make sense that they would refer to each other as brother and sister but it's still just not a good choice on the writers part.
Agree
The best beast man romance I've ever read... And we all know this s*** is about to be like seven chapters