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Now I've read my fair share of Yaoi. One of my favorites is Killing Stalking. So I can look past force somethings.
But this story has absolutely no character development it is just going with some sort of narrative it already has planned.
He could've just simply taken the pendant the Seme wasn't holding it hostage it was legit in his pocket and he was tied up. Everything about the Seme annoys me honestly. There is no development in his background I guess he just enjoys casually raping people.
And idk but if I was a virgin I don't think I'll take my first experience by force so lightly especially if it's some dude I barely know and lives in the same area as me. Uke took it like it was his everyday routine.
Personally i think the author should work on character and story development everyone seems so cold and lifeless. I can't see actual people acting like this in real life.
My personal opinion on the story I see it is rated a 9.2. So don't kill me
Nice then buy this on the official site comment there will help not whine on a pirate website..
Also if you have so many suggestion on a PIRATE website not the OFFICIAL website then it won't help...stop whining and start showing （￣へ￣） appreciation
Whine? I am stating my opinion on the story I read. This is the COMMENT section where of course you would typically leave a comment on what you read. Not a appreciation post just my personal opinion on a story I read. Don't take it personal.
And if giving an opinion is whining then you to are also whining.
I'm not taking it persona just saying that for reading from a pirate website and not the OFFICIAL one your expectations are sure high 1st buy it then complain
What expectations? I've read amazing stories on here. Are my expectations supposed to be low because this is a Pirated Website? Because I'm going to need for yo I to clarify that.
And you seem to be taking it personal. I understand this may be your favorite story. That's fine. Just make sure to go purchase it so you can show your appreciation. But all opinions aren't the same as yours.
I gave my opinion once again. You can't dictate my opinion and how I should use it. That is not rules. So instead if paying attention to the critical response fill your day with joy and ignore it and move on to all of the other appreciation comments. And discuss what you appreciate.
It would be understandable that you paid money to read this and criticise cause you didn't like it and your money went in vain but nope you do it on a pirate website where people steal and upload and have high expectations of it.that's the problem but you won't get it
Haha, I have a similar opinion. I wouldn't say I need it to be realistic, since we're reading fiction... But the characters do seem to be pretty dumb, shallow, nothing I can think of would describe their behaviour, they're just going with whatever comes to mind first. Not s great plot... Not even great sex. Thumbs up. I applaud people with critical thinking.
Typically I can get around the illogical worlds that Mangas create. But this one I just can't. This entire Manga has been a comedy for me, I'm sorry lolz.
I would say more but ii don't feel like being attacked. If you're one for these types of stories by all means.