
So we have no character development, no chemistry, no satisfying relationship and no fucking conversation!
Most of the story I was like "just fucking talk, don't think it to yourself."
Also it's a waste that we didn't see their powers properly. Most of the time it was like a "wooosh" or a "baaang" or some shit like this and some sentences barely saying what the character did.
I don't mean to be harsh, I'm sure the creator put effort on it but it really isn't worth reading.
Also what's with Nolan? So he bangs hardcore with his boss, then Evan forces himself on him even harder, then gets gang raped by his boss, and again go for it with evan like nothing has happened? Like, walking around acting all goofy and stuff? I get that he's a pushover but it's a bit too much.
I really am into dark and twisted stuff that are kinda hard to read, but it was like trying to be dark but really wasn't.
Also Evan doesn't really seem like a good guy to me. He has ZERO personality, like a statue or something. He is irresponsible at his job. He cares about nothing except having Nolan to himself. And he doesn't even listen to his partner during sex and has his way with him. Ughhhhh... Idk somehow I'm really mad about everything going on. I might not even read it if any other chapters come out.
Too short
Too fucking short ╥﹏╥
Don't leave me like this.