
I can’t really get into and that’s just me ig. I feel like it’s lacking something, something more humane. It feels a bit empty or awkward at times as if the writer has read a bunch of stories similar to this one then took a piece of each story to try to come up with their own. The characters feel incomplete like their personalities haven’t been rightly put together. It just feels like something is missing and because of that I can’t tune into the emotions the writer is trying to express… It does have a great plot tho, but I just can’t seem to stay interested enough to see it through. Also again this is my honest opinion! I have no hate or anything for this story and I hope everyone else enjoys reading it!

This ended up being way more complicated than I thought… The whole family’s rotten. Throw them all away! ML need to get away from all this while he can. It’s too much to handle. 2 abused kids and 1 who can’t act right cause he was neglected by his father and cradled by his brother. I want chairman to die and for all of them to go to therapy but if it was up to me to make it all happen im leaving.

I don’t mean to offend anyone but does the mc ever grow out of his lame phase? He’s very immature and still pretty cowardly and female driven. Like I get happy when he wins a fight cause I’m no longer worried about him dying, but I never have those moments where I just think “dang he’s cool.” It’s just giving a loser that survived another day. I’ll hold on to hope and keep reading tho

Oh ok I’m glad you enjoy it that much. I finally found the mc I was looking for a few chapters later after chapter 15 lol. He finally started to get serious and did some crazy training for 2 months and now the hard work is paying off. I was starting to feel kinda bummed that he was just winging it and not actually assessing his skills or self improving. He just recklessly threw himself into each fight no preparation whatsoever and it stressed me out each time. Now he can smoothly use his skills and make new combos with them!!

I’m begging for her to meet other people her age!!! I’m tired of looking at the same 5 people over and over again! I want her to have a friend or at least come across someone in her age range- she’s surrounded by adults that can be considered as family at this point and the male lead all the time… it’s saddening! Her social life needs to be expanded.
I mean yea he hid the fact he was keeping tabs on him to write a story but like cmon man- Bro did not have to be that cold T-T
Mc really did try his best in his own way… Calling him selfish was too much!(it’s also probably like a depressing trigger word for him cause he gets called that all the time without really understanding why…) He just struggle with emotions and common sense when it comes to others! He just found out how it feels to like someone! DONT TAKE THAT AWAY!!!!