Banana-Soup

I mean yea he hid the fact he was keeping tabs on him to write a story but like cmon man- Bro did not have to be that cold T-T
Mc really did try his best in his own way… Calling him selfish was too much!(it’s also probably like a depressing trigger word for him cause he gets called that all the time without really understanding why…) He just struggle with emotions and common sense when it comes to others! He just found out how it feels to like someone! DONT TAKE THAT AWAY!!!!

I can’t really get into and that’s just me ig. I feel like it’s lacking something, something more humane. It feels a bit empty or awkward at times as if the writer has read a bunch of stories similar to this one then took a piece of each story to try to come up with their own. The characters feel incomplete like their personalities haven’t been rightly put together. It just feels like something is missing and because of that I can’t tune into the emotions the writer is trying to express… It does have a great plot tho, but I just can’t seem to stay interested enough to see it through. Also again this is my honest opinion! I have no hate or anything for this story and I hope everyone else enjoys reading it!