I have to say, this story was cute. I just wish it had better communication between the two characters. Because it wasn’t like your casual avoidable everyday misunderstandings with these two, their communication was just straight up shit. And as much as I love both uke and seme I wish uke spoke up more without having to have seme stupidly chime in for him the voice his opinions in the worst way possible and I wish seme wasn’t a dick for brains character cs they’re designs r cute as so are they it’s just some lil trinks in the writing here and there.
Girl how the hell is he getting his freak on with a ghost?? Explain pls. Cs first few chapters ain’t do none of that shit. And also love how no one’s talking about how bro saw ghost pooki’s wounds and bruises and didn’t bother to ask him about it, he js kept thrusting and pinched at it. Like nigga what?? And then they js glossed over the scars and abuse all tg like damn
Ts will always be fire I’ll never get tired of rereading this. My guilty pleasure lwk
I’m gonna lose it. How is this teacher not fired yet? He’s a grown adult and an employed educator at that, so not only is he creepin on one of his students but he has nasty imaginary beef with another over said student. Bro deserves to get locked tf up on child endangerment charges
Seme’s straight trash. Like as sexy as this is seme completely ruined it for me. Uke clearly didn’t consent to the second time they had sex but seme raped his against his will Uke stated multiple times that he wasn’t into being forced and never consented to him going as far as he did. And seme didn’t gaf so he can go suck dirt for all I care.
I’m afraid that’s a ladder u don’t wanna climb Colleen Ballinger but do what u want girl get fcked up if u want to
lmao imagine she gonna pull a ukulele on the verge of dying
STOP WHAT I’M CRYING
So bro’s a rapist. And ofc he knows what he’s doing is wrong yet continues doing it when his friend in unconscious and cannot in any way shape or form verbally consent. And after the friend found out instead of being respectfully and rightfully so disgusted and appalled they brush it off with him blushing and jerking off to it only to play it off as a joke by the end with the fucking “how far did you go with me?” That shit wasn’t funny if anything it was all the more concerning because it tells you that bro genuinely didn’t know what tf was happening to him. His friend could’ve have multiple dudes ramming him unconsciously and the one time the friend did it he could’ve gotten mistaken. Idk but this feels like a waste of good potential.
Could’ve def worded this better but I think u get what I mean by my overall disgust.
IT’S A FUCKING ONE SHOT?? BUT IT WAS SO CUTE