I need spoilers lowkey but I’m pretty sure we’re already caught up with the raws so what’s the point?
I feel like somewhere in this chapter there was poor writing but I can’t quite point it out or confirm cs I’m too tired like something clicked n it kind of made me feel like there’s some shitty writing, and while yes, a lot of people may say it’s the rape part I feel like PLOT wise there was something that kind of ticked me off and came off as sort of poor writing, idk how to explain it so like goodnight
I love this omgg they’re both so cute and although smut is good n all the first time felt unnecessary so when it came to them doing it again at first I was js hoping they would talk it out and shi but ig they did that in a way…not an amazing way but nobody’s perfect ig overall though this was pretty cute def gonna reread for my pretty bird babies
BAE CALM DOWN YOU TARGETING THE WALL WAS DEFINITELY ENOUGH GO GET HIS DEADBEAT ASS DADDY NEXT NOT HIM, SWITCH TARGETS CHAT. ML…this isn’t you..
ME N WHO?? LIKE WHAT TIME N PLACE?? I’M CHOKING YOU’RE PUSHING?? I VOLUNTEER TO GO NEXT?? I VOLUNTEER AS TRIBUTE?? ME NEXT?? LOOK OVER HERE?? WHERE N WHEN??
It’s just me n you
BITCH HE TOLD U TO GROW A BACKBONE WHILE YOU’RE THINKING ABT THOSE WORDS SO MUCH WHY DON’T YOU TAKE THEM BITCHES TO MIND LIKE OMGGG YOU FUCKING IDIOT ILYSM BUT BAE THERE’S A LIMIT TO HOW DUMB YOU CAN BE ESPECIALLY INVOLVING ML I can’t say I hate this story tho although some of it ticks me off I think it’s supposed to be written that way
STOP CS HE WENT OFF ON THAT OLD FART LIKE THAT LIKING BOYS LIKE ABSOLUTELY SENT ME I’M GLAD HE TOLD HIM THE TRUTH SOHAN’S WAY BETTER OFF WITHOUT THAT USELESS PIECE OF TRASH MESSING UP HIS MENTAL STATE AND HOME