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It feels like every aspect is too light for the heaviness the plot holds, mc is too forgiving and I feel like even really kind people irl would feel more emotions that mc did, like holy shit? You saw your ONLY family, your CLOSEST friend "die", get gang raped and the perpetrator even talked about fucking the corpse???? The reuinion w him was legitimately so fucking disappointing, like after all that, you only did that?
Even the part where he cuts himself, it's such a good topic to dwell in when it comes to depression, regret and self blaming, but it was just kinda ignored? Like one panel abt him doing it and a portion of like 2 chapters talking about it briefly. I get that they did acknowledge it but it would've def been better if it was tackled a LOT more...
And the plot just kinda got everywhere? Like it was supposed to be some typa revenge whtvr, i also get that sometimes theres some plot twist that completely changes the premise, but the way they dissipated that was just not it(⊙…⊙ )