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Did the ml get botox or what, cuz tell me why the entire story, all he could facially express was (⊙_⊙)
Artist played too much into the nonchalant top act
ML literally said "I'm hard(•_•)"
LIKE HELLO??? SHOW SOME EMOTIONS?? A LIL BLUSHING??? ANYTHING??

Awww cutee!! pacing was hella fast and convo was confusing at parts too but artstyle made up for all that ig lol.
Also they did Sarang so bad LMAOO giving him two eyes in a chibi and then jiha saying to bada "when you and sarang meet" FOUL LMAOOO

Art style so good it feels illegal to read it
i mean it is illegal to read it but whatever
Fr tho the art is the definition of ethereal!!
The body hair made it wayyy better!!

Plot was quite interesting and well paced for 4 chps.
Altho i kinda wish for an author's note to explain everything, but also its better this way cuz it's kind of an open ending? or well just not much of an explained ending but it's obvious.

I concluded that the demon seems to be visible to only those who have lost their loved ones and feel empty? The demon gives them an illusion of comfort. Also when they zoom out and show panels where the demon isn't visible, it shows that the readers can't see the demon because they aren't in the same vulnerable state as the mc. The artist shows that Michael can see him but not us, which makes it clear.

There's just one plot hole that I didn't understand, and its chp 3 pg 21 and chp 3 pg 27. What is that meat that the demon is putting inside him??? He talks about descendants? I thought there'll be mpreg cuz of those two panels

Either way, 10/10!!

Was this a dare that the author had to complete??
WHAT THA FACK DID I JUST READ
This has to be a parody lmaoo

The way the artist avoided drawing legs/lower half of the characters for the earlier chapters is a bit funny or maybe I'm looking too much into it, which is probably the case but I can't help it lol.
chp 1 pg 3
chp 1 pg 17
chp 3 pg 2
chp 3 pg 13
ESPECIALLY IN CHP 4 PG 3 for the cat scene

also did the artist get lazy and decided to just add dialogues in chp 10 pg 4? cuz it talks about falling but there's no such scene??
I'm being too much of a critic when I can't draw for the life of me so I'll not say much but yeah the artist can def do better, they totally have the potential for it.
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Roy reminds me of Sukuna-
The pink hair, the cursing and the ego

no cuz I was BAWLING reading that chapter and then you say it's a "penalty"
i feel so betrayed and played with????
helpp lmao I'm happy for the main couple nonetheless.
Also the game developing and just all of it reminded me of Semantic error and then i cried again cuz its been a while since it ended

This shit was so funny, the facial expressions were so cringe i can't-
Half of the story was a close up panel of the inside of the uke's wrinkly asshole

This was a pretty good read. Although the art and dialogues could've been better, the flow of the story was really good.
Minjae to an extent deserves to be hated. Now I know he had trauma and all but Lee Sunho also went through the same trauma in a way, which shows that if Minjae wanted to, he could have not chose to do what he did with the father's son, he could've chosen to be a better person the same way Lee Sunho was. There aren't any specific panels justifying my point of Lee Sunho being a good person in his school life but it can definitely be assumed from the parts where he tried to help Minjae when the orphanage director harassed him, or when he tried to ask for help from Minjae. now you might ask what is the connection between asking for help and being good, well if you think about it, asking for help shows that Lee Sunho didn't want to be in the position he was in, he wanted way out. But in case of Minjae, rather than asking a trusted adult for a way out, he poured out his anger and frustration by making the father's son suffer.
Minjae was selfish throughout the story so it feels a bit weird for him to be so self sacrificing only for the sake of his father's revenge. Why does he care about the revenge? He never cared about killing the boy. All he cared about was his father so why at the end, he wants to redeem himself for the sake of his father?
I know there are no logical replies to these questions because emotions and logics can't be weighed the same, hence it makes this story realistic.
The characters are written really well when it makes the readers hate Minjae despite knowing about his own trauma. It puts the readers in a dilemma.

HELPPP THAT THING ON HIS CROTCH LOOKS LIKE A BOTTLE-
not the baby batter dripping as soon as he put it in XDD
that aside, I'm so grateful for this upload, cured my blue balls ( ◜‿◝ )♡
Also the art got so much better as if it wasn't already ethereal!!? I'm in love with the light and shadows, the artist even drew a strip of rainbow, like that is the level of perfection!!! just check out chp 35 pg 42 to get what I mean.
I'm so in love with the art ugh I just wanna lick the artist's hands (๑♡⌓♡๑)