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The plot's very straightforward and smooth, it doesn't run away or repeat itself to lengthen it. The ending, frankly, I wish there was more, but it already seemed to have solve most of our questions, only leaving a bit of regrets. Truthfull, I like this kind of ending, the real ending, no lingering of anything that more fabricants remained you know? It's his 18th birthday, he's alive and living.