beta
I love them but feel like the story could have been better explored. Like, some elements of their childhood, family relationships, and what happened at their coming of age ceremony as well as some other stuff, everything gave me a feeling of "oh, I want to see how this develops" but the author just never did it? It's a bit underwhelming bc I actually liked both characters A LOT, they're so cute together and I can tell their feelings run deep and their story is beautiful, ig this is just a case of an author having a great plot that doesn't match up with their writing skills, though perhaps this might actually be more of a publishing company issue? Bc most of the problems could be solved by expanding the flashbacks but that would take at least another chapter and that can be up to the publishers availability