beta
the sillyness, the sexyness, the drama, the communication. it's perfect
the only thing i'd change would be the very end, I agree with the person who commented they thought it was badly written/unsatisfying, I personally would have preferred if, instead of that weird grand gesture, the author had opted for a timeskip to when Young Won came back, maybe moving in with Hyun Woo, BUT it's overall not a bad ending, just not my type.
side note: I ship the team leaders, no one can convince me they aren't lesbians