
I can't take it anymore! The characters are truly beautiful to look at, but I'm sorry, but the story is clichéd and facile.
None of the protagonists/antagonists are engaging. The images are beautiful, the poses sexy, but the story is bland.
Wasting chapters on pointless redemption. Just cliché sentences thrown in, like deep thoughts.
You can't help but read on to see if it's going to lead anywhere, and I have a feeling we might be disappointed.

A cliché story for the moment.
A bad, gambling father wants to sell his daughter for money. She's smart and runs away to a friend's house.
She goes to a ball and runs into some henchmen who want her back. She runs away and gets into an unknown carriage.
For the moment, it's cliché: she's stupid, playing tag with the maids (really?!)

Okay, so the guy may be handsome, but he can't keep a few areas of his castle clean after creating a stable for his dragons.
He has a whole team, and they're incapable of maintaining any semblance of control over his territory.
People are starving, but he doesn't realize it.
It's not just management; it's starting from scratch.
Do I have a drinking problem? The chapters have been all over the place lately!