
Damn, I felt like the story had a clear path of what it was trying to accomplish but then at some point, it went in a completely different direction. I think this story has potential if it didn't feel so rushed; is that only me??
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I felt the exact same. It seemed like a pretty standard bl at first, and the uke was even starting to come around, but then the seme went and took him captive, which felt... unnecessary? Like the captivity kink was sort of forced in there for the hell of it. The stalker as well - what was that even about?

Okay well first, I really enjoyed this story. The art when it was just drawn and in color were both amazing!! This was probably my first manga where the Top was so naive, honestly it was cute!!
But ok, there was a little scene where it shows a building with sunlight and it said rise and shine. Reading it, I thought of the Kylie Jenner meme :') idk pls no hate cause I took the time to say something so irrelevant. But the first part of my comment was pretty much my original plan for this comment!!
No way we all read this right at the start of the month. And we’re all feeling the same, like what was this and why is it not THAT bad but like… what??