the premise is good but the timeline is all out of wack, this is so unusual, they keep jumping from the past to the future, cant they just implement this in a way that doesn't take up a whole chapter each time?
I agree but we are still at the start of the story and those are bribes of memory in accordance with the actual thoughts of the characters, so I think that in order for us to conprehend the author must make those jump
But I don't think it will happen so often later since then, we will be able to understand the motive, the past etc
We juste need to be a little more patient
the art is beautiful but the way the characters are drawn is so emotionless, and there's no movement on their face, so i cant really feel the story or empathize with the characters, maybe the artist is used to drawing background and not people
big agree, it's like it's just a little too close to realism but not close enough so it's in a weird uncanny valley with no facial expressions lol
The most expression we see is when they're the most cartoonish/chibi-like