kejiji May 4, 2021 2:29 pm

it could've been a lot better— making mikhail's past and connection to the mafia more specific and detailed. same goes for reinholt's job. some scenes can also be improved especially the action ones.

however, considering this is only short then it's understandable why it is fast paced and focused more on how things will happen rather than a more detailed background of those things. and since it's not as detailed, it's actually also a good point since it didn't had to go through many things before getting resolved. it's like straight to the point way and there's no secret boss or whatever and i like that. art is also good. definitely a good read!

kejiji May 4, 2021 4:50 am

i've known light will be a funny one bc of some of his conversations with kiha but to think he have such tastes (⊙…⊙ )

kejiji May 3, 2021 2:22 pm

maybe the reason why aliens won't come to me is bc my closet is messy. it's definitely time to clean them and meet the alien of my life

kejiji April 9, 2021 2:39 pm

currently in ch 50 and even tho i've come so far i still can't get hooked to the story. tbh i hate mc who are weak and really fragile so zay is not my cup of tea. plus seeing how the plot currently goes it's all about the seal the seal yeah all about the seal and im hoping for more broad perspective at this point. i'm already halfway through and seriously everything is just abt the seal and i'm kind of fed up of it already. plus going back to zay, not that i hate her but she's too weak to the point that she trembles and cries for almost every chapter plus no display of strong points aside from how she healed aseph's scars. i mean it's like there's not really much of a development aside from them finally confessing to each other despite that seal.

ig i'll come back to this later if i feel like it. i like the art and still curious on how the story will go so yeah.

    QuinnB April 10, 2021 1:40 am

    Ive been struggling to start this one too! Would be my third attempt now, but I assumed it would get better later on (given the views + high ratings) so good to hear feedback on it before I start to invest my time again on it.

    Bish May 23, 2021 1:35 pm

    The 2nd season was better than the 1st season since there's more "plot" and action to it rather than just the FL crying because of the goddamn seal

kejiji April 5, 2021 2:02 pm

im so sorry author im just a broke ass student so let me repay you back when i finally have the money to buy

kejiji April 4, 2021 3:34 pm

as an iron fortress like the uke, i definitely approve of mob a and mob b as friends

kejiji March 18, 2021 3:10 pm

OH MY GOSH I NEED MORE

kejiji March 4, 2021 4:05 pm

this is so beautiful

kejiji March 3, 2021 9:12 am

i actually thought they were gonna have threesome lol

    Angel yaoi March 3, 2021 6:03 pm

    It would be foursome at this point

kejiji February 16, 2021 7:41 am

this is probably one of the most laid back stories i've read

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