Nah whattttt- now why would the author think it was a good idea to make the kids become her potential lover???
That's some next level pedo behavior mindset. Who in their right mind would come up with such stupid plot when the story was going so well at the start??????
I felt like I was baited with a cute found family plot and then hit with a pedo boulder
It reminds me of that other story. "Follow the bread crumbs." Where the witch knew them as kids. She marries the boy/prince later. ewww
I've been enjoying this lately, but the fl is not as funny as she used to be. I missed when she was a crackhead. I mean she still is, but in recent chapters she's more blushy
I've been binge reading this for about two hours now and I'm still laughing about that one time Ellenfiela Ruth Demortia Irenius River Marguerite got kidnapped and suddenly got powers but it disappeared she called it a free trial lmao
If you put me and him in a room I'll guarantee you that one of us is going to be pregnant and it's not me.
If I beat that pussy up, is you gon' tell on me?
If I beat that pussy up, is you gon' tell on me?
I love you like I actually do
LMAOOOOO
I know I might anger some people but this is my honest opinion about what I've read so far.
I'm gonna be fr right now, I'm not really into cedin and MC's relationship. He's too much of a "puppy"? And not in a good way. Idk if I'm too "woke" but their romantic relationship rubs me the wrong way.
It's too eh.. he's very handsome but for me he's like a slice of bread. It's not bad I would still eat it but a slice of bread is still a slice of bread. He's so plain and boring in contrast to the mc. I wish that in the future chapters he'll have some kind of thing that'll make him attractive.
Because for now, he's just a random character. There's not really much of a redeeming quality when it comes to him.
the one eating the bread is rene, not you
What??
Hard disagree. It’s rare to get puppy male leads. If people wanna complain then they should just read like 95% of other stories from this genre that have “strong, powerful, fierce” MLs that are just as boring often
No I mean I like the ml. I just wished that I'm future chapters he can show more.
I like puppy personality, I'm just saying that at the moment he's a bit "normal" compared to the fl
Ah, yeah, I think it’s cause story focuses on the family a lot now.
I don’t think that will change. He’s still one of the strongest in the empire, it’s just that FL is insanely overpowered.
No I meant personality wise. I acknowledge that he's strong, but he lacks other emotions. Idk he just seems like such a text book definition of a "puppy" type of personality.
Please don't take this as such a negative way, I like the ml I just wished that they would show his other traits more. I'm only expressing my opinion and thoughts.
Oh, yeah. I see your point. He does kinda lack personality other than “I love FL”. Like he’s not an independent human being
Chill I’m only exchanging opinions too :) At first I might’ve been a bit more aggressive cause I’ve just seen too many people complaining about puppy ML instead of typical strong and toxic ones. When there’s like 8372892922 stories with them. I think your criticism is valid, so don’t worry
I'm at chapter 24 rn, do we ever get to actually see the temptation demon? Tbh I'm only staying for the astras. They're so cute and funny.
I was really hoping that the astra demon will become the ml ngl. I feel like he vibes with the MC's mischievous personality.
If we do meet him irl, what chapter does he show himself??
8.5/10
Would've been a 10/10 if there was more scenes where they could show them catching feelings.
I know they do "show" them but I want more scenes like idk them talking. It feels a bit too fast and the romance leading up to them ending up together is a bit lackluster.
I do love the story and the concept, I wish they could've added more to make it whole.
Please tell me there's another manga. I'm so sad that there wasn't really much screentime for romance to develop.
These mothers bruv... Girl take care of your son first, he looks like he about to explode