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Ive read plenty of variety of yaoi and man this just kicks the ball out of the park?? The flowers, the art, the character designs (SHAAL LOOKS SO HANDSOME WHAT THE FUCK), the story is just *chef's kiss* Ive been smiling like a lunatic the entire time I was reading this. THE CHARACTER EXPRESSIONS ARE SO GOOD TOO I ESPECIALLY LIKED THE VARIETY OF FACES SAL HAD WHEN HE WAS EMBARASSED OR SURPRISED AHHSHS. THE EMOTIONS ARE DRAWN SO WELL TOO WTF
Although i wished it was longer or had more extras (i want another love scene hehe) i personally felt the pacing for the story was good.
The way shaal and sal's relationship progressed from friends to attraction to LOVE felt natural and organic. And man the respect and admiration they had for each other and the constant support they had for each other,particularly shaal's support for sal is just beautiful.
Ive read beautiful manga too before that left me hanging in the end but this one didnt. Altho i wouldnt mind having more of it DEFINITELY ONE OF THE BEST YAOI sorry i got longwinded its the first after a long time that ive read a yaoi as beautiful as this again.
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I kinda expected that in the flashback it would actually be revealed and explained that hosik consented fully aware (and wanted it too!) to have sex w/ sunbae. Turns out, it just showed in detail how sunbae pushed and pushed a drunk hosik to have sex w/ him. Aaaaa i wanted to love this so much since the couple is so cute together and sunbae is such a great dad but sunbae is also so rapey. I mean, sure "dont read if you dont like", "it aint real". But still. Like an earlier comment said, thats just like normalizing rape and that aint good.
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i was legit scared of the jerk getting subin at the end. Like, the tell tale signs of jun/subin breaking up was allover the extras and i was lyk btchh jun is way better than that jerk. They may have problems but jun is thinking of longterm w/ subin and that rlly won me over for him. Pls dont make subin choose the jerk at the end and man i was just really happy that it is still jun/subin at the end.
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This manga was almost perfect. The seme was great and respectful and caring and they had a healthy relationship but chapter 6.5 kinda irked me. I was like "where did the rational, respectful alpha ive grown to love as a seme go?" . And yes the uke wanted a condom and i believe that use of condoms should be consented by both parties right? But the seme didnt put in one and he went straight alpha with those "i wanna impregnate you" and for me, the uke had trauma with rape and with semes telling him shit like that. So with his mate doing that to him.... man it was like a complete 180 degree turn. And his excuse of "its cuz im an alpha. Dont think its all sunshine and rainbows all the time." So whats that mean? That its inevitable that you'll rape him too? Where did the seme who controlled himself go? The one who no matter what happened never pushed past what the uke wanted and was comfortable with? I mean im probably reading into much since this is yaoi what do we expect but many people kept touting this as realistic and if thats how were going to be well imma point this one out as well.
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I share your opinion on some degree but I also think that the uke was somewhat okay with that als long as its Hazuki who loves him so much impregnates him. If he would really hate it naoto would have told him, I'm sure of that and I'm sure Hazuki would have stopped I bet he just wanted to be a bit rougher, thats of course no apology in a serious situation tho.
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Among many other things i love abt this manga is the way the author draws men as men. And the sex scenes are really hot but full of feelings you know? Its so steamy but you can feel the emotions from the panels. Like ugh i cant explain it well but this manga hits so many good points (also whoop yuki ravishing haru at the end is so good man i want more this couple went thru so much i wanna see them fuck more lol)
Seriously, whats up with the author and they keep making fathers in this look that young and amazing. Also holy shit i never expected this to be this good i finished all 67 chapters as of now.
My heart aches so much for athy when she thinks of stuff like how she mustve 'stolen' jeanette's 'rightful' place as claudes daughter and that she never really belonged from the start babyy noo
A true commenter right for sure!!
I think it's mentioned in the novel or in the comic itself (but i forgot which chapter) that the adults looks young because of their magic, it doesn't mean they want to look young on purpose, it's just having strong magic is equal to stay young longer in this story