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As someone who read this in one sitting, I’m genuinely confused on a couple of things:
1. What even is the plot anymore? I know the sisters wanted to be reunited and run away together, but the fl is inconsistent with her actions/behaviour and her sister stated that she doesn’t want to leave that place anymore, so what the hell?
2. Does everyone know the ml is partially blind or do they all believe he’s fully blind lmao?
Overall tho, I think them fucking every chapter is sidetracking me following the story lmao. I’m not really complaining tho. He sure is a red flag, but I need a red flag like him in my life lolol!