beta
Okay a few things.
Firstly, I absolutely love the “standing my ground and voicing my wants” vibes Sumire gives off. A strong fl is always good, can’t go wrong with that.
Secondly, Reo looks like an entirely different person. It took me a second to wrap my head around his new appearance.
Thirdly, I adore Inowaki, he’s just happy to be involved. I love him.
Fourthly, Rio the true best friend with the “let me know when you need an alibi” card.
And lastly, the age gap. That is 7 years and not in a good way. There is no grooming, but 16 and 23 rubs me the wrong way. If it was 23 and 30 then that’s different, but, I don’t know. I guess his new appearance makes him look younger, but still. I don’t know if I can get past the age gap on this one no matter how cute the story is.