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Was the slap supposed to make things even now(when yahwi slap Jooin)? Instead of showing yahwi growth, you put in one apology and a slap to make up for it . I know you can write better than that.
*to clarify when I said "showing yahwi growth" I meant show us on screen, us as readers seeing the growth for, not only him, but show Jooin the change too, not through a timeskip. It should've happen before not after.