The story itself is good but the story telling is messed up. I hope author san will gain more knowledge on that aspect cause it's very important. I can't keep up with the story because important details as to why this and that happened isn't portrayed well.
Woah!! This is going somewhere very hot and interesting. McQueen craving for Ed's asshole then Chang will definitely find out about this and will want to have sex with Ed as well. Ohlala!!!
I've been giggling the whole time.
That boner tho